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 The Crobo Wars [Chapter 5] 
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This story is based on a squad of Crobo Shock Troopers that...Well just read the story.(It shall also include the Corps.)

Chapter 1

Fire. So much fire. I thought the world was in flames. Then out of the smoke came a Dropship. The doors opened and someone jumped out out and jetpacked to the ground near me. "Help!"I screamed. He then ran over and began to check out my wounds. "It looks like you took some shrapnel in the chest but you should be alright with some rest and repair". He then motioned with his hand at the Dropship. A second later two more Crobos jetpacked down. One came over to me and housted me on to his back. The Crobo that had checked me over then asked me" How many other survivors are there?" but all I could say in response was "Fire...Fire...". I was flown through the air on the Crobo's back up towards the dropship. Before we entered the Dropship I noticed another two Dropships coming down. Then I blacked out...
When I came too I was on a Metal bed-like-thing. There were a large number of other bed-like-things in the room and there was a sign on the wall saying 'Crobo Corp.' and last but not least there was a Floating Robot that was checking the other wounded Crobos. The first thing that I thought was "Who am I?". I truely could not rember who I was, Or who these 'Crobos' were. The Crobo who found me suddenly walked through the door and came over to me. "Hello again.How are holding up?" he said. Then I said"Except from not being able to rember anything I am fine, thank you" He then very loudly said "Damn!!! You gotta be kidding me. Look,Come with me and we can go and get this sorted out". And so off we went.

So what do you think?


Chapter 2 (Gonna try my old why of writing the people talk)

Ten minutes later we were outside a plain metal door. Before he pressed the button to open the door he said "Listen, My name is 5093 but my men just call me Aureus. Everthing is gonna be fine"
In response I said "Thanks. My name is...Well I am sorry but the only word that comes to mind is 'Crobo'". He then pressed the button and the door opened. When I steped in I was shocked to see a large window faceing...Space. We were in space. And then I say the high commander.
High Commander:"Welcome! Sit down! Now,Why are you here?"
Aureus: "Sir,The Crobo says he cannot remember who he is."
High Commander: "Oh...He must 1983. The one you picked up from the reckage of the outpost. I was informed of his state. (He then handed my a small computer) Here, This has all the info you need to know about Crobos and Crobo Corp."
Me: "Thanks sir"
High Commander: "No promblem. Now according to my records your men called you Wolf"
Wolf: "Sir if you dont mind me asking, Whats with these 'Names'?
High Commander: "Well every company has a 'Source'. A place were they get there names from. Aureus's company use old Roman names. Your company used Animal names"
Wolf: "Wait a sec. My company? And what do mean 'Used'?"
High Commander: " You were the commander of your company. And I am afraid that your company was manning an outpost when it was wiped out. I am sorry. Aureus, Can you show Wolf to his quaters. Wait! On second thoughts, Bring to your company quaters. I want you to accept him as one of your men until he gets his memory back. dismissed!"
Wolf and Aureus: Sir Yes sir!


Chapter 3

And so I found myself a member of Bravo Company. Everyone was as nice as normal Crobos can be. I had just found out that I had more advanced imtions than normal Crobos. But I was plaugued
with dreams of a dreadful heat and fire. And the screams of my fellow Crobos as they died. Two days after I had joined Bravo Company I asked Aureus how my men had died.
Aureus: "Fire. The enemy used fire. They came down in Dropships and used incendiary grenades. Your men were roasted alive.
After this I felt great a anger rise within me...
Wolf: "WHO!"
Aureus: "I'm sorry...We dont know...

[Onboard a vessel nearby]
There is a large group of Empyrical Laboratories Storm Troopers are gathering in a hanger bay. They are mounting Inter-Ship Attack Vessels. They are armed with AK47 and Frags. In the Captians Lounge the captian is talking to someone on the Inter-Com:
Empyrical: "So High Commander....Have you found out anything new from Wolf?"
High Commander: "I am sorry to say no....He has short term memory loss..."
Empyrical: "Too bad! Your time is up! My men are going to storm your Space Station and FORCEFULLY get what i need from Wolf. In two hours you are too de-activeate the ships power so my men can board you.
High Commander: "Um......."
Empyrical: "Remember are deal High Commander. And get on with it"
High Commander: "Yes Sir!"


Chapter 4
Thing first thing I heard as I woke up was the whine of an alarm. There were Red Lights flashing everywhere and I could hear loud THUDS from other areas of the Station. Aureus was getting his men ready for something. When I went to ask him what the was an explosion. The wall nearest to me had been hit! I felt the pull as all the air was sucked out the room. I thought I was a gonna be dead meat when I felt a strong hand grab my arm. It was Aureus
Aureus: "Activate your Anti-Gravity boots!"
He had to use the radio to say this since there was pretty much no air left in the room. I then remembered that Crobo Shock Troopers were equiped with Anti-Grav boots to allow use to assault enemy ships and space stations. I then reached down and turned it the Boots on. Me, Aureus and the rest of the Company then made our way to the door, Opened it and went through. On the other side we Turned of our Boots and made our towards the Hanger. I talked to Aureus on the way.
Wolf: "Whose is attacking us?"
Aureus: "Empy labs. Their Storm Troopers are all over the ship. The weird thing is its like they are looking for something. The other weird thing is how they got past are sensors and then past are sheilds and Defense Cannons. Well it those not matter now, We just need to get off the station..."
We then turned a corner and came face to face with a squad of Storm Troopers. One of them said something into his radio and then they opened fire. But we were faster, Gunning down three of them with our PA-60s and Plasma Cannon. They could see that they were not gonna bring us down
in a firefight so they charged us. Two of them came right at me. I tried to stop him bringing his AK
down on me but I did not succed and found myself on the ground with him about to shot me. A second before he pulled the trigger he stopped and in that second his heas exploded, Struck by a Plasma Round. I was showered in blood and brains as I waved a thank you to to Duponuis, Are Heavy Wepons guy. I jumped up and pulled out my PA-60c with which I shot the second attacker. I was not luckey enough to kill him and only hit his arm, With which he was luckly holding his gun. He then ran at me but haveing learned my lesson I stepped to the side at the last minute and tripped him up. As he fell I shot him in the head twice with my PA-60c. I turned to see how the others were getting on and saw that they had pretty much wiped out the enemy. Aurues was just finishing off an enemy by caveing his skull in. He did this by keeping the enemy in a head-lock and beath him on the head with his PA-60. When he was done he told that we had to move and to leave
any who could not move. These was gonna be a bloody day....

Chapter 4
[Onboard the Empy Labs Battleship]
There is a large modfied Crobo Mrk3 walking across the command bridge. Inside is the brain that is Commander Dauss. A clone has fallen asleep at his post. Commander Dauss picks him up like a rag doll and rips off his arm. The clone is wide awake now and is screaming. There is blood everywere. Commander Dauss breaks the clones neck. Empy walks on to the bridge.
Dauss: "Captian on deck!"
All clones jump up and stand to attention.
Empy: "At ease! Dauss,Did you kill another clone? Look,It take 3 weeks for one of these advanced clone to be made and it is a pain in the butt to have to use lesser quality clones to fill in for the dead. Now lets forget it and get on with bussiness. How comes the attack?
Dauss: "We nearly have full control of the station and I just a radio from Team Alpha 3 to say that they have spotted Wolf."
Empy: "Good! Me and Commander Zalo are going over to the station to say hi to are friend the High Commander. Has message got out the the Crobo leader brain capnbubs that his men are under attack?"
Dauss: "I am afraid to say yes...Are sensors just picked up a large Crobo fleet making their way here.
Empy: "No matter. We shall just speed up our plans. Tell all teams to plant their charges and get off the station.
Dauss: "Yes sir!"
Empy walks out the door. He walks to the hanger were Commander Zalo and 50 Storm Troopers are waiting to board their ships.
Zalo: "Orders sir?"
Empy: "When you find the High Commander...Kill him."


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Mon Jun 04, 2007 10:05 pm
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Why must everyone copy Dauss?


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Dauss wasn't the first one with a fan fic, I even came before him.

*on topic* This seems like it will be a good story if you keep it up.


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Just to let you know Crobo clones generally have very stern personalities, no sense of humour and a complete inability to comprehend sarcasm :smile: The Crobo commanders and officials however are much more normal in their mannerisms and personalities.


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Orindell wrote:
This story is based on a squad of Crobo Shock Troopers that...Well just read the story.(It shall also include the Corps.)

Chapter 1

Fire.So much fire.I thought the world was in flames.Then out of the smoke came a Dropship.The doors opened and someone jumped out out and jetpacked to the ground near me."Help!"I screamed.He then ran over and began to check out my wounds."It looks like you took some shrapnel in the chest but you should be alright with some rest and repair"He then motioned with his hand at the Dropship.A second later two more Crobos jetpacked down.One came over to me and housted me on to his back.The Crobo that had checked me over then asked me"How many other survivors are there?" but all I could say in response was "Fire...Fire...".I was flown through the air on the Crobo's back up towards the dropship.Before we entered the Dropship I noticed another two Dropships coming down.Then I blacked out...

When I came too I was on a Metal bed-like-thing.There were a large number of other bed-like-things in the room and there was a sign on the wall saying 'Crobo Corp.' and last but not least there was a Floating Robot that was checking the other wouned Crobos.the first thing that I thought was "Who am I?".I truely could not rember who I was,Or who these 'Crobos' were.The Crobo who found me suddenly walked through the door and came over to me."Heloo again.How are holding up?" he said.Then I said"Except from not being able to rember anything I am fine, thank you"He then very loudly said "Damn!!! You gotta be kidding me.Look,Come with me and we can go and get this sorted out".And so off we went.

So what do you think?


SPACES AFTER PUNCTUATION, THIS IS THE FOURTH TIME I'VE SAID THIS.


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to be totally correct isn't it supposed to be a double space after a period?


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capnbubs wrote:
to be totally correct isn't it supposed to be a double space after a period?


Eh, they say that, but I've never done it. It just feels too weird hitting space twice, like I just did.


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Nfsjunkie91 wrote:
Orindell wrote:
This story is based on a squad of Crobo Shock Troopers that...Well just read the story.(It shall also include the Corps.)

Chapter 1

Fire.So much fire.I thought the world was in flames.Then out of the smoke came a Dropship.The doors opened and someone jumped out out and jetpacked to the ground near me."Help!"I screamed.He then ran over and began to check out my wounds."It looks like you took some shrapnel in the chest but you should be alright with some rest and repair"He then motioned with his hand at the Dropship.A second later two more Crobos jetpacked down.One came over to me and housted me on to his back.The Crobo that had checked me over then asked me"How many other survivors are there?" but all I could say in response was "Fire...Fire...".I was flown through the air on the Crobo's back up towards the dropship.Before we entered the Dropship I noticed another two Dropships coming down.Then I blacked out...

When I came too I was on a Metal bed-like-thing.There were a large number of other bed-like-things in the room and there was a sign on the wall saying 'Crobo Corp.' and last but not least there was a Floating Robot that was checking the other wouned Crobos.the first thing that I thought was "Who am I?".I truely could not rember who I was,Or who these 'Crobos' were.The Crobo who found me suddenly walked through the door and came over to me."Heloo again.How are holding up?" he said.Then I said"Except from not being able to rember anything I am fine, thank you"He then very loudly said "Damn!!! You gotta be kidding me.Look,Come with me and we can go and get this sorted out".And so off we went.

So what do you think?


SPACES AFTER PUNCTUATION, THIS IS THE FOURTH TIME I'VE SAID THIS.

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capnbubs wrote:
Just to let you know Crobo clones generally have very stern personalities, no sense of humour and a complete inability to comprehend sarcasm :smile: The Crobo commanders and officials however are much more normal in their mannerims and personalities.
realy I allways saw them as dumb helpless bruts with out a robot comander(your avatar)


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gtaiiilc wrote:
capnbubs wrote:
Just to let you know Crobo clones generally have very stern personalities, no sense of humour and a complete inability to comprehend sarcasm :smile: The Crobo commanders and officials however are much more normal in their mannerims and personalities.
realy I allways saw them as dumb helpless bruts with out a robot comander(your avatar)


Actually they are fairly intelligent, they are designed that way so they know how to cope in a firefight and understand tactics etc.

They are no use in a commanding role though, they have no imagination and can't think for themselves. An enemy commander with any knowledge of them would predict them every time.

That's why the brains designed for the commander clones are made more human, so they can bluff and double bluff the enemy and are hard to predict.


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Geez capnbubs, why couldn't you have joined EL? :P

I mean, together...

We could develop an entire Crobo conversion...

But not me. I'd just make ideas.

AND YES ZALO.

You code better then me. :(

I'm learning though.


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I want to keep the Crobos a solo project.

They are my babies =]


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I want to keep the Crobos a solo project.

They are my babies =]


Admirable of you, good sir.

I, however, lack the coding ability to say the same.

I am a thinker...

Code r confoosing.


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capnbubs wrote:
They are my babies =]

I want your babies.

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I fraged your babbys

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