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AlphaCommando
Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm
Posts: 514
Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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New chapter tomorrow morning, my brain needs a recharge from about a million tests today, but I won't let you guys down. Also to Orindell the Crobos were the origional squad who all lost their humanity during a "bad" dropship landing.
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| Sat May 12, 2007 1:19 am |
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Orindell
Joined: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:15 pm
Posts: 440
Location: Dublin, Ireland
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COOL!You should include that in the story!
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| Sat May 12, 2007 12:23 pm |
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Mombasa
Joined: Tue Mar 06, 2007 12:21 am
Posts: 355
Location: Florida: The Oil Capitol of the United States
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We needs moar!!!
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| Sat May 12, 2007 10:58 pm |
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AlphaCommando
Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm
Posts: 514
Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Sorry guys, had major writers block today, I promise a new chapter tomorrow.
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| Sun May 13, 2007 2:58 am |
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Orindell
Joined: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:15 pm
Posts: 440
Location: Dublin, Ireland
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AlphaCommando wrote: Sorry guys, had major writers block today, I promise a new chapter tomorrow. So were is are new chapter?Hmmmmm?
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| Mon May 14, 2007 8:13 pm |
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couchcaboose
Joined: Tue Oct 31, 2006 6:10 pm
Posts: 358
Location: at ze kopta!
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Yeah! Where is it? Sorry, I'm just really eager. It seems like you have created some literature hungry people here.
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| Mon May 14, 2007 11:40 pm |
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Arctic71
Joined: Sun Jan 14, 2007 11:41 pm
Posts: 40
Location: Canada
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Ya i would have to agree 
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| Mon May 14, 2007 11:42 pm |
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3 solid
Joined: Wed Mar 28, 2007 9:02 pm
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Location: Somewhere. Nowhere.
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AlphaCommando wrote: Thx, next chapter is more talky than actiony, and will help develop character personalities, your character, and serial are some the key characters, next chapter. - 3 Solid
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| Tue May 15, 2007 9:06 pm |
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Orindell
Joined: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:15 pm
Posts: 440
Location: Dublin, Ireland
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Maybe,since Alpha has stopped adding chapters,someone else should pick up were he left off.Agreed?
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| Wed May 16, 2007 7:36 pm |
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AlphaCommando
Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm
Posts: 514
Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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No Im backkkkkk. Srry it took so long guys I will start releasing chapters more regularly now. I was having problems with school work, but that is all solved now. Enjoy, next chapter is about what everyone is doing on their day off.
*hehe, 69th post*
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| Wed May 16, 2007 11:37 pm |
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Mombasa
Joined: Tue Mar 06, 2007 12:21 am
Posts: 355
Location: Florida: The Oil Capitol of the United States
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Nice backstory, still one of the best fanfics. But now we need some combat (a zero-gee op might be interesting.
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| Thu May 17, 2007 1:01 am |
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AlphaCommando
Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm
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Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Its interesting you mention zero-gee, Im not giving anything away; but lets just say the S.I.C. and the Royal Navy arn't going to let the Alquarian army be dominating in orbit for long  . Oh and a little backstory admiral Wegmeyer is my great-grandfather; abeit with a higher rank, he was a captian in the pacific fleet during WW2.
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| Thu May 17, 2007 12:02 pm |
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Mombasa
Joined: Tue Mar 06, 2007 12:21 am
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Location: Florida: The Oil Capitol of the United States
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Oh, that's nifty.
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| Thu May 17, 2007 4:34 pm |
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AlphaCommando
Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm
Posts: 514
Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Can anyone make a good symbol for the Alquarian and Other militaries? The Alquarians It needs to be an organic, and earth color type of thing, the S.I.C very Industrial and the Royal Army a noble, royay seal type of thing.
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| Thu May 17, 2007 4:56 pm |
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AlphaCommando
Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm
Posts: 514
Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Srry for the double post everyone. But chapter 6 is out, yayyyyyyyy  , chapter 7 is gonna be way way better.
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| Fri May 18, 2007 12:40 am |
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