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 A War to End All wars: By AlphaCommando; Chapter 13 

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 A War to End All wars: By AlphaCommando; Chapter 13 
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caboose wrote:
I like me.

And so do I.

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Just a heads up, I'm not going to split up the squad for the next 3 chapters. Try as I might I can't come up with enough good material, for three chapters like that in a mere bunker. The 4th chapter will round up this section, and chapter 5 will be back on the ship. I'll find a better place to put the split up part later. Mabey in a city enviroment (a first for a CC fanfic) *Hint*Hint* :grin:
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Nuuuu! I won't show up until chapter 5! That'll take forever! >: |
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Hmm this looks interesting and there are good comments about it... I cant read it tright now cause i have to go back to school but ill read it later and tell you what i think. :)
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Yay, urban combat FTW!! Is somebody important going to die sometime in this story (like in 95 % of movies and books today)?

THE CORRECT ANSWER IS NO!!!
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I think this is very,very good.But at the start Empyreal gives me an order even through I out-rank him.AND MY GUY NEEDS TO BLOW MORE STUFF UP!!!!BAM!KABOOM!BOOM!!!!


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Holy Mombasa wrote:
Yay, urban combat FTW!! Is somebody important going to die sometime in this story (like in 95 % of movies and books today)?

THE CORRECT ANSWER IS NO!!!


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I think this is very,very good.Put at the Empyreal gives me an order even through I out-rank him.AND MY GUT NEEDS TO blow UP!!!!BAM!KABOOM!BOOM!!!!


fixed.
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????
Damn post length.....
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Holy Mombasa wrote:
????
Damn post length.....


he said "MY GUT NEEDS TO BLOW UP MORE STUFF" I turned it into "MY GUT NEEDS TO blow UP!"
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Oh lol. Not to rush, but ZOMGWTFBBQLOL HURRY UP!!!.... lol x2.
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Just a few more mins left then Ill post ch. 4., easily the best chapter yet :D .
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couchcaboose wrote:
Wowowowow! I love this! This kind of stuff brings all the excitement up my spine! It's great! I smile and giggle because it's so awesome. I know I might be exaggerating but this is so great that it could almost match the Halo books. While I was reading this, it was like WOW IT'S LIKE HALO! BUT WITH PEOPLE I KNOW!!

Yet again, this is a great success!


You see you do not really know us.You what we want you to know about us.For you no I could be a girl.YOU COULD BE A BOY!!!!
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* tries to read *......

*Head Explodes* Just Kidding
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Update: chapter 4 is out, as I said it is easily the best and longest chapter yet. Im also going to release the gun that my character uses; the RX-230 in the mods section soon.
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Two words: F~CKING AWESOME!!!

ENERGY SWORD FTW!!!
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