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A War to End All wars: By AlphaCommando; Chapter 13
A War to End All wars: By AlphaCommando; Chapter 13
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 Joined: Wed Mar 28, 2007 9:02 pm Posts: 1639 Location: Somewhere. Nowhere. 
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  caboose wrote: I like me. And so do I. - 3 Solid |
| Thu May 10, 2007 4:45 pm |
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 Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm Posts: 514 Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Just a heads up, I'm not going to split up the squad for the next 3 chapters. Try as I might I can't come up with enough good material, for three chapters like that in a mere bunker. The 4th chapter will round up this section, and chapter 5 will be back on the ship. I'll find a better place to put the split up part later. Mabey in a city enviroment (a first for a CC fanfic) *Hint*Hint*
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| Thu May 10, 2007 5:18 pm |
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 Joined: Tue Oct 31, 2006 6:10 pm Posts: 358 Location: at ze kopta!
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Nuuuu! I won't show up until chapter 5! That'll take forever! >: |
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| Thu May 10, 2007 5:44 pm |
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 Joined: Sat Jan 27, 2007 4:47 am Posts: 221 Location: In a box
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Hmm this looks interesting and there are good comments about it... I cant read it tright now cause i have to go back to school but ill read it later and tell you what i think.
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| Thu May 10, 2007 5:58 pm |
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 Joined: Tue Mar 06, 2007 12:21 am Posts: 355 Location: Florida: The Oil Capitol of the United States
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Yay, urban combat FTW!! Is somebody important going to die sometime in this story (like in 95 % of movies and books today)?
THE CORRECT ANSWER IS NO!!! |
| Thu May 10, 2007 8:00 pm |
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 Joined: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:15 pm Posts: 440 Location: Dublin, Ireland
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I think this is very,very good.But at the start Empyreal gives me an order even through I out-rank him.AND MY GUY NEEDS TO BLOW MORE STUFF UP!!!!BAM!KABOOM!BOOM!!!!
Last edited by Orindell on Thu May 10, 2007 9:57 pm, edited 1 time in total. |
| Thu May 10, 2007 9:29 pm |
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Holy Mombasa wrote: Yay, urban combat FTW!! Is somebody important going to die sometime in this story (like in 95 % of movies and books today)? THE CORRECT ANSWER IS NO!!! Quote: I think this is very,very good.Put at the Empyreal gives me an order even through I out-rank him.AND MY GUT NEEDS TO blow UP!!!!BAM!KABOOM!BOOM!!!! fixed. |
| Thu May 10, 2007 9:51 pm |
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Joined: Tue Mar 06, 2007 12:21 am Posts: 355 Location: Florida: The Oil Capitol of the United States
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????
Damn post length..... |
| Thu May 10, 2007 9:53 pm |
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Joined: Sun Feb 25, 2007 2:53 am Posts: 82
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Holy Mombasa wrote: ???? Damn post length..... he said "MY GUT NEEDS TO BLOW UP MORE STUFF" I turned it into "MY GUT NEEDS TO blow UP!" |
| Thu May 10, 2007 10:05 pm |
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Joined: Tue Mar 06, 2007 12:21 am Posts: 355 Location: Florida: The Oil Capitol of the United States
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Oh lol. Not to rush, but ZOMGWTFBBQLOL HURRY UP!!!.... lol x2.
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| Thu May 10, 2007 10:08 pm |
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Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm Posts: 514 Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Just a few more mins left then Ill post ch. 4., easily the best chapter yet
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| Thu May 10, 2007 10:25 pm |
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Joined: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:15 pm Posts: 440 Location: Dublin, Ireland
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couchcaboose wrote: Wowowowow! I love this! This kind of stuff brings all the excitement up my spine! It's great! I smile and giggle because it's so awesome. I know I might be exaggerating but this is so great that it could almost match the Halo books. While I was reading this, it was like WOW IT'S LIKE HALO! BUT WITH PEOPLE I KNOW!! Yet again, this is a great success! You see you do not really know us.You what we want you to know about us.For you no I could be a girl.YOU COULD BE A BOY!!!! |
| Thu May 10, 2007 10:30 pm |
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Joined: Tue Mar 06, 2007 12:21 am Posts: 355 Location: Florida: The Oil Capitol of the United States
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* tries to read *......
*Head Explodes* Just Kidding |
| Thu May 10, 2007 10:34 pm |
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Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm Posts: 514 Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Update: chapter 4 is out, as I said it is easily the best and longest chapter yet. Im also going to release the gun that my character uses; the RX-230 in the mods section soon.
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| Thu May 10, 2007 10:35 pm |
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Joined: Tue Mar 06, 2007 12:21 am Posts: 355 Location: Florida: The Oil Capitol of the United States
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Two words: F~CKING AWESOME!!!
ENERGY SWORD FTW!!! |
| Thu May 10, 2007 10:42 pm |
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