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A War to End All wars: By AlphaCommando; Chapter 13
A War to End All wars: By AlphaCommando; Chapter 13
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 Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm Posts: 514 Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's 
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  Youll be in it just later in the bunker scene, as a clone who was captured spying in the base.
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| Thu May 10, 2007 5:09 am |
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 Joined: Tue Oct 31, 2006 6:10 pm Posts: 358 Location: at ze kopta!
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Wowowowow! I love this! This kind of stuff brings all the excitement up my spine! It's great! I smile and giggle because it's so awesome. I know I might be exaggerating but this is so great that it could almost match the Halo books. While I was reading this, it was like WOW IT'S LIKE HALO! BUT WITH PEOPLE I KNOW!!
Yet again, this is a great success! |
| Thu May 10, 2007 5:12 am |
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Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm Posts: 514 Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Hehe, thanks, people seem to like the whole members from the forum are the characters thing.
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| Thu May 10, 2007 5:15 am |
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 Joined: Sun Jan 14, 2007 11:41 pm Posts: 40 Location: Canada
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hey that sounds cool but do i have to get captured or cant i just meet you guys as a operative in the 2nd mission? I would make me sound much better
Hey wait could i be put into your squad when you get back the the main ship and i stay in your group from then on so me and couch are put into the squadren when your getting your meal when you guys are talking we like come up from behind and inform you guys? Last edited by Arctic71 on Thu May 10, 2007 5:21 am, edited 1 time in total. |
| Thu May 10, 2007 5:16 am |
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Joined: Tue Oct 31, 2006 6:10 pm Posts: 358 Location: at ze kopta!
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Oh yeah. Please don't forget to make challenging enemies... Because it seems like the whole team is taking them on single handedly...
Well, you probably know that anyways, but I'm just saying... |
| Thu May 10, 2007 5:19 am |
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Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm Posts: 514 Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Its getting there, each sub-squad meets a couple Juggernaut war droids, kind of like Crobo MK.3s on uber steroids, and gives them a serious thrashing. And I guess Artic you can be some one we meet up with during a second mission thats fine
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| Thu May 10, 2007 5:26 am |
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Joined: Sun Jan 14, 2007 11:41 pm Posts: 40 Location: Canada
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yay! thnx love your story dont know where you come up with this stuff
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| Thu May 10, 2007 5:32 am |
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Joined: Tue Oct 31, 2006 6:10 pm Posts: 358 Location: at ze kopta!
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Probably it's just his nature, or he reads books like this...
By any chance do you read the Halo books? |
| Thu May 10, 2007 5:34 am |
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Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm Posts: 514 Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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I dont really know either, Ive always been told i'm creative and could be a writer, and am actually writing a real Novel in my spare time. and yes I do read Halo novels, Ghosts of Oniyx was great
 .Last edited by AlphaCommando on Thu May 10, 2007 5:38 am, edited 1 time in total. |
| Thu May 10, 2007 5:36 am |
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Joined: Tue Oct 31, 2006 6:10 pm Posts: 358 Location: at ze kopta!
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Thats great! Best of luck! Even though you don't need it! xD
Posted after 1 hour 2 minutes 32 seconds: I see that you are online Commando... Are you updating? |
| Thu May 10, 2007 6:40 am |
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Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm Posts: 514 Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Nein, update later today, I pumped out 3 chapters yesterday
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| Thu May 10, 2007 6:43 am |
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Joined: Sat Dec 23, 2006 12:37 pm Posts: 406
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I love it.
I love my character (it make me feel unique) I love the other characters I love it all! |
| Thu May 10, 2007 7:06 am |
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Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm Posts: 514 Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Can do, do you want me to turn up, or tone down the sociopathiconess.
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| Thu May 10, 2007 11:22 am |
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Joined: Sat Dec 23, 2006 12:37 pm Posts: 406
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its cool as it is but if you want TURN IT UP!
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| Thu May 10, 2007 11:54 am |
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Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm Posts: 514 Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Cool, I'm making him like Sev from Star Wars: Republic Commando, he's cool.
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| Thu May 10, 2007 12:26 pm |
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