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3 solid
Joined: Wed Mar 28, 2007 9:02 pm Posts: 1639 Location: Somewhere. Nowhere.
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- 3 Solid
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Wed May 09, 2007 5:23 pm |
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Orindell
Joined: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:15 pm Posts: 440 Location: Dublin, Ireland
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One thing:What those RVG stand for?And here is chapter 4:
And so I ended walking towards my enemys HQ with clone that I think has been out in the sun too long.About ten mins later he stopped.Then,very suddenly,he pulled me to the ground with him.
What the f**k our you doing?
Red Clone:Shhhhhhh!
What?
(In a whisper)Red Clone:Their is a patrol of robots a few meters ahead of us.
Why didnt I hear them?
(In a whisper)Red Clone:They are jetpacking pretty high up in the air.
Ah!Oh...And you never told me your name?Mine is 1327.I'm from Alpha Company.
(In a whisper)Red Clone:Mine is 6967.I'm from Delta Company.
Then we got and continued walking.Delta Company.....Delta Company.....Where had I heard that before?Then it hit me!Delta Company had been the first to land on the planet.Thats not a big deal on its own but then we suddenly lost all contact with them.When we sent a rockit down to check it out Delta Company shot it down!This guy was probaly just waiting to kill me!But why had he saved me when i was about to open that rockits door?Maybe there was somthing in the rockit that he did not want me to see.This was all very confusing.Its time I got some answers!And so I aimed my gun at him and said:
Stop!Put down your gun!
6967:What the hell are you doing!!!Put that away!
What?Some you can kill me traitor!No!Now what do want at the green HQ!
6967:Look....you dont understand....its complicated.
Then a shot rang out.But it was not me or him.So who was it?Then I looked up and a Robot with a Shotgun slowly circling us.I began to fire at him with my AK.I got luckey and hit his jetpack.He went flying into the ground.Then I noticed that 6967 was lying on thr ground,and from the look of it did not have much time.I ran over to him:
Wait!Dont die!I dont want to be alone!
(Blood coming out of mouth at same time)6967:Go.....Find the others..... Stop the war!
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Wed May 09, 2007 9:54 pm |
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Nfsjunkie91
Joined: Tue Dec 05, 2006 1:21 am Posts: 432
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Orindell wrote: One thing:What those RVG stand for?And here is chapter 4:
And so I ended walking towards my enemys HQ with clone that I think has been out in the sun too long.About ten mins later he stopped.Then,very suddenly,he pulled me to the ground with him. What the f**k our you doing? Red Clone:Shhhhhhh! What? (In a whisper)Red Clone:Their is a patrol of robots a few meters ahead of us. Why didnt I hear them? (In a whisper)Red Clone:They are jetpacking pretty high up in the air. Ah!Oh...And you never told me your name?Mine is 1327.I'm from Alpha Company. (In a whisper)Red Clone:Mine is 6967.I'm from Delta Company. Then we got and continued walking.Delta Company.....Delta Company.....Where had I heard that before?Then it hit me!Delta Company had been the first to land on the planet.Thats not a big deal on its own but then we suddenly lost all contact with them.When we sent a rockit down to check it out Delta Company shot it down!This guy was probaly just waiting to kill me!But why had he saved me when i was about to open that rockits door?Maybe there was somthing in the rockit that he did not want me to see.This was all very confusing.Its time I got some answers!And so I aimed my gun at him and said: Stop!Put down your gun! 6967:What the hell are you doing!!!Put that away! What?Some you can kill me traitor!No!Now what do want at the green HQ! 6967:Look....you dont understand....its complicated. Then a shot rang out.But it was not me or him.So who was it?Then I looked up and a Robot with a Shotgun slowly circling us.I began to fire at him with my AK.I got luckey and hit his jetpack.He went flying into the ground.Then I noticed that 6967 was lying on thr ground,and from the look of it did not have much time.I ran over to him: Wait!Dont die!I dont want to be alone! (Blood coming out of mouth at same time)6967:Go.....Find the others..... Stop the war!
Red versus Green.
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Wed May 09, 2007 11:37 pm |
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Orindell
Joined: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:15 pm Posts: 440 Location: Dublin, Ireland
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Cool,thanks!And here is chapter 5.And what do ppl think of my story?
Chapter 5
And so I held the closest thing I ever had to friend in my arms,as he died.But what others?The rest of Delta Compny?The strange group that made their way to the Green HQ?I dont know.Maybe I never will.But since its the closest I decied to make my to the Green HQ.I made it there without any trouble.There was four Green Clone's guarding the main entrance.It was to many for to take on myself so I tossed a grenade at them.They must have either had nerves of steel or just been plain stupid because they just sat there untill it exploded killing them all.I ran as fast as I could through the Front Door and continued running until I reached an armoury.I walked in and was amazed at the amount of guns they had in there.I walked over to one of the racks and picked up five frags,AK 47 ammo,a pistol and one of those sheild things that I placeds on my back.I then ran to the nearest hanger bay.Inside there was only one rocket left.I walked over to and then rembered that the brains always piloted the rockets.Crap.But I had some computer skills so I set to work fixing the rocket up so that I could fly it.Just as I finished a patrol of Green's walked by.They began to fire at me so I took the sheild thing and ran to the rocket.I then simpliely flipped a few swithes and oof I went after the ''Others''.
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