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aracanid
Joined: Fri Apr 06, 2007 12:27 pm
Posts: 181
Location: Ireland du nord
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sorry, i misunderstood your post. Thank you purple.
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| Sun Apr 29, 2007 10:10 pm |
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KeroroCanti
Joined: Sun Dec 10, 2006 6:19 am
Posts: 126
Location: Dimension 56-12
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The story is great, but I think you need to get a bit further into it for anyone to think of a good name.
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| Mon Apr 30, 2007 2:16 am |
 
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Here for the mods.
Joined: Sun Mar 18, 2007 12:31 am
Posts: 218
Location: Somewhere over the Rainbow.
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Good story, should be named [clone number] Cortex Battle Log, 2366.
Might I add a story of a robot?
//INITIALIZING DATA BANKS//
[FILE OBTIAINED]
//OPENING FILE//
//SERCHING FOR CORTEX WARS DATA...//
[COTEX WARS DATA FOUND]
//INITIALIZING DATA REPLAY//
//OPENING FILE//
[FILE OPENED]
3:50 A.M.
TANK FULL
BRIGADE FULL
BODY DAMAGE MINIMAL
MISSION BRIEF...
OBTAINED.
INFILTRATE ENEMY BASE
DESTROY CORTEX BRAIN
//EQUIPMENT SCAN//
[10] ACID CANISTERS
[1] NANO ACID
[1] MODIFIED SMG
[1] PROTON GRENADE
//FILE CLOSED//
//PREPARING FOR DROP//
//DROP INITIALIZED//
4:00 A.M.
0.0 OF BRIGADE DETAINED
//LOCATION SCAN//
150M FROM CORTEX
-10M BELOW SEA LEVEL
//CHANGE ARAMENT//
[NANO ACID]
//INITIALIZING DIG//
BEGIN
4:03 A.M.
0.0 OF BRIGADE DETAINED
ENEMY UNITS DETECTED
//SCANNING//
IDENTIFIED AS [5] GREEN CLONES
//CHANGE ARAMENT//
[MODIFIED SMG]
//INITIALIZING SCAN//
WEAK AREAS-
HEAD
NECK
GROIN roflol
//INITIALIZING ATTACK//
BEGIN
Something like that.
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| Mon Apr 30, 2007 3:07 am |
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Orindell
Joined: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:15 pm
Posts: 440
Location: Dublin, Ireland
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I am going to make a series of mods based ofa this story!Any one want to help?
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| Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:05 pm |
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A90
Joined: Sat Apr 28, 2007 1:04 pm
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Any chance of me adding another story to this?
I've done 1 chapter, so I can add it right away.
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| Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:29 pm |
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Orindell
Joined: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:15 pm
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Location: Dublin, Ireland
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If we accept everybody that askes if they can add a story a lot of bad things will happen.How about everybody that wants to add a story PM's the story to me and aracanid.OK?(And for the record I am not being mean I just dont want the story to be ruined.)
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| Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:36 pm |
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A90
Joined: Sat Apr 28, 2007 1:04 pm
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Pmed you both. Hope you accept it.
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| Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:53 pm |
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Orindell
Joined: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:15 pm
Posts: 440
Location: Dublin, Ireland
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New chapter gonna be out soon for me.also i will soon release the Pathfinder actor.
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Here for the mods.
Joined: Sun Mar 18, 2007 12:31 am
Posts: 218
Location: Somewhere over the Rainbow.
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Orindell wrote: If we accept everybody that askes if they can add a story a lot of bad things will happen.How about everybody that wants to add a story PM's the story to me and aracanid.OK?(And for the record I am not being mean I just dont want the story to be ruined.) I don't want to ruin it, I just want to post my story without making a new thread, it'll be short.
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| Mon Apr 30, 2007 11:06 pm |
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A90
Joined: Sat Apr 28, 2007 1:04 pm
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Chapter 1 of my war journal has been added. Opinions would be good. Chapter 2 will be added shortly.
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aracanid
Joined: Fri Apr 06, 2007 12:27 pm
Posts: 181
Location: Ireland du nord
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what he said lol. This is getting a pretty big first post. To bad there isnt somewhere to put the storys. 
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A90
Joined: Sat Apr 28, 2007 1:04 pm
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Second chapter has been PMed to Aracanid.
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Orindell
Joined: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:15 pm
Posts: 440
Location: Dublin, Ireland
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And yet not me....(Goes and cries in corner)
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| Tue May 01, 2007 7:58 pm |
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A90
Joined: Sat Apr 28, 2007 1:04 pm
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Chapter 2 of my war journal has been added, expect Chapter 3 tommorow.
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Orindell
Joined: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:15 pm
Posts: 440
Location: Dublin, Ireland
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This is finish off my story
[NEAR UPB HQ]
(Captian's Richards squad are surrounded)
Crp 163:Man down!
(He then gets hit in the face with a plasma slug)
Sceaming>Crp 163:AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
(A grenade sails through the air blows up ate the squads feet.Only the Captian survives,and he wont last long)
Coughing out blood>Captian Richards:♥♥♥♥.....They are all dead......On are last mission.....♥♥♥♥.......
(15 Robots walk out of the gloom)
Captian Richards:Bastards!
(Before he dies he pulls the pin out of his last frag)
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!
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