Introducing the Datarealms Mamba!

Here are the rules for submission:

4 Lines, Mamba style.
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When Pieces of quality are posted, they will be incorperated into the song.

And when I it complete, I will actually SING IT! and post the MP3 file here on the forum, that you may make fun of me.

Here is what we have so far:

When the rythym starts to play,
You can go out dancing everyday.
And here upon the floor,
If you move, then you may stay.
-Lin

When the singers begin a song,
Come close we can’t go wrong,
And when you are close,
Our love is spicier than most.
-Jack

When the floor begins to shift,
Through the bodies we will sift,
And once we are in place,
We'll show the others that were deft.
-Alenth

Better not be in Quick Time Player, or something like that, because this crap computer can't play it.

My try at mamba :

So who clean the rotting corpses,
It's flooding the bunker with miasma,
Why are there dancers here?
It smells like hell in this bunker!
-Foa

Data made a very cool game
I think he will get lots of fame
This game is really the best
This could win a game fest!

Umm... Leevizer its

6 words------
6 words------
5 words-----
7 words-------

Hello, I'm Jox. That is me
I'm my bunker, waiting my order
Strange sound wath that could be?
It's just a MOAB... O SHI...

lol, I'm bad at it

It's by syllables, but noone's posted the pattern, or the stress order.

"Four lines, mamba style".

So... Could anyone give better details?

Kekekeke, jack's didn't say anything furry-like.

that rhythm reminds me of the song THIS IS ACID by Maurice

"this is the name and song that makes your body move around as you dance......"
"as it has a certain groove that makes you're body want to move when you hear it..."
"When the acid hits you're soul it makes you lose control of you're body...."

ect ect...

http://youtube.com/watch?v=EMJ6O9iiuvY
ignore the video

I just thought id point that out.

Its suggested that it be in the same time and rythym of... Sway.

song = here
http://sidneynorth.com/Z_Sway.mp3

THERE GOES THE SIREN THAT WARNS OF THE AIR RAID
THEN COMES THE SOUND OF THE GUNS SENDING FLAK
OUT OF THE SCRAMBLE WE'VE GOT TO GET AIRBORNE
GOT TO GET UP FOR THE COMING ATTACK

DOESN'T MATTER WHAT YOU SEE
OR ONTO IT WHAT YOU READ
YOU CAN DO IT YOUR OWN WAY
IF IT'S DONE JUST HOW I SAY

I THINK, YOUR RAPPING SUCKS
MAYBE IT'S A POEM, AW SHUCKS
LOL RHYMES MAKE GOOD SONGS
CAPS DO TOO, WHICH IS WHY THIS SONG WINS MORE THAN YOURS. SRSLY.


I wasn't inspired.

As we sway with rhythm
And shuffle on our feet
The floor is bouncing
And tonight, our souls will meet

Ooo, I like that neph, Good work.