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Data log: Day one.

I looked outside the rocket, of course, that would have been stupid cine rockets aren't equiped with windows, but I imagined what it was like outside, the rocket hadn't taken off yet, but clones were still running round like crazy, trying to organise everything and equip everyone. I'm not alone in my rocket, there is a blue clone with me, but he wont talk to me. I have only a SMG, a couple of grenades and a medium digger. Of course, clones aren't equipped as well as they used to be. The rocket door opened and a brain drone stood outside, brain drones were very recent, they were just small flying drones with a brain attached. Did I mention the humans are allying together now? Only come of them, but so far the gallaxy is divided into two armies, Green, and red. The brain drone spoke in a metallic, emotionless voice.
"ARE YOU EQUIPPED?"
"Affirmative."
"IS BRAIN COMMUNICATION DEVICE ATTACHED CORRECTLY?"
I unclamped my helmet and revealed the small metal device on my head.
"Affirmative."
"ARE YOU READY?"
"...Affirmative."
The brain drone floated to the side and the rocket door shut again, I was back in the pitch black darkness. After a few minutes of waiting I heard the brain drone outside.
"LAUNCH SEQUENCE INISCIATED." (screw the spelling!)
"Here we go.."
"5..
4...
3...
2..
1..."
I heard the jets of the rocket initiate, the rest was up to the brain connection. Anything could go wrong at this point, if the door opened we would fall out and die, if the rockets failed we would fall to our deaths without even knowing, if we were shot down we would die, and if the brain to rocket connection wasn't working properly we would fall and die.

Brilliant!

I heard a bang on the bottom of the rocket, the door opened, amazingly we had landed! The blue clone got up and jumped out.
"Wait!"
I heard a huge explosion, the rocket was knocked over sideways, I saw the small monitor on the ceiling turn off, the rocket had stopped working, I clambered out myself, I saw the blue clones mangled corpse nearby, but my attention instantly went to the grenade heading towards me.
"AAHH!"
I grabbed the grenade and threw it back, but it went too far and whatever threw the grenade just threw more, I ran away instead of being constantly grenaded for the day. I heard a voice in my head.
"CONNECTION TEST. DO YOU READ ME?"
"Loud and clear."
I talked aloud, it looked weird to normal people, but we were battle clones, we understood.
"YOU MUST FIND THE OTHER CLONES, THEY HAVE MET UP OUTSIDE THE BASE."
"Where's the base?"
"YOU LANDED NEARBY IT! YOU SHOULD FIND IT YOURSELF!"
"But the rocket got-"
"Communication, over."
"Argh. Right. Base finding."
I looked up and saw a clone despratley trying to fly away, I shot him down he fell to the ground next to me, he was still alive, just.
"Sorry soldier. Death before dishonor."
I aimed my SMG at his head and fired. I felt sorry for him, but if he did make it out the brain drones would have messed with his head anyway. I headed off in a random direction, oddly enough I didn't meet much resistance around here. I looked round, there was a small hill nearby, a robot walked over it, he was carrying a AK-47.
"Oh F- woah!"
Something grabbed my leg and pulled me down into a hole, I looked round, It was another green clone.
"Who-"
"Ssshh."
I heard the robot walk nearby, it stopped near our hiding place. I heard the robotic clicking and whirring of it's body parts as it looked round, then it walked away.
"Are you crazy soldier? If that robot heard us, we would be spare DNA!"
"Sorry, I havn't seen another clone since my rocket crashed. Do you know where the base is?"
"No, I've been trying to find it too."
"Damn.."
"Me and some other clones set up a temporary camp near here, I'll take you to them."
"Ok."
The clone got up and looked round, then waved his hand to show it was safe. I got up and folowed him as he lead me to my camp.
"So.. What number are you?"
"#1337.. I'm not proud of it."
"Haha. I'm Clone #0616."
"0616? Isn't that-"
"Yeah, I know, everyone thinks I'm a goth, or an emo. But I'm just a clone."
"Is religion even allowed anymore?"
"Don't think so."
"Typical."
"Skele on your left."
I aimed my SMG to the left and shot the Skeleton square in the head."
"So, where were we?"
"Religion for clones."
"What kind of religion would clones have anyway?"
"Hmm.. Well, god can't of made us, since we're made in a factory... We might be Buddhist."
"Buddhist? Why do you say that?"
"It fits. Buddha isn't god, so god didn't make us."
"Do you know anything about Buddhism?"
"I know they worship a fat guy and think they'll come back as a snake or something when they die."
"When we die, the only thing that happens is our bodies are remade into new DNA."
"Hmm.."
"Is it just me, or is it really quiet?"
"What do you mean? There's loads of noise?"
"I mean metiphorically, wheres the bullets flying overhead? Wheres the crashing rockets? We met a robot and a skele on the way here, what about the war?"
"You mean the invading reds? They'll be dealt with in no time."
"Wait.. Your not red?"
"You.. Are?.."
We stopped, then aimed our SMG's at eachother. I was about to pull the trigger, but just before I did something whacked me on the back of the head really hard. I fell to the floor, my vision faded, and before I couldn't feel anything I could have sworn I felt something small and metal on my head.


Bugger.




Data log: Day two

I opened my eyes slowly. I rubbed the back of my head, oddly enough I wasn't wearing my armor or Helmet, just the clothes I normally wear underneath. Oh, and I somehow survived. I got up but I nearly fell off balance, my head felt heavier than normal. I put my hand on my head, they'd messed with the brain interface!
"Damnit!"
I looked round. I'd been lying on a small bed, the room around me was like some kind of medical center. Now, that was odd, why would they try to heal me instead of killing me? I noticed a door, I walked to it but before I even put my hand on the button, I heard a loud robotic noise in my head.
"CONNECTION GAINED. WELCOME NEW SOLDIER!"
"What? New soldier?"
"GREEN TEAM, GREEN-"
"WHAT!? Since when was I in gr-"
Then I realised it. They'd messed with my brain to clone interface and changed the connection, they'd converted me to a green.
"I'm not fighting for green."
"NO, YOU ARE THE CLEANING CLONE."
"WHAT!?"
"GET TO WORK!"
"I AM NOT CLEANING YOUR FU-"
"Connection lost."
"DAMNIT!"
I grabbed the connection thingy on my head and treid to pull it out, or atleast break it. No use. I pressed the button to open the door, it slid open in front of me. I walked outside, the base was more complicated than the reds made it out to be. It looked like something out of star trek. Yeah, they still do those, 5046th series now. Anyway.. I looked round for any clues of an exit, or a rocket. Luckily, I found the armory instead. I put on the armor, and was amazed at the little HUD they had intergrated into the helmet. It told you how long till you die, how healthy you are, and more importantly, it had a small map in the corner. Luck was on my side today. I reached for an SMG, but then I remembered they had AK-47's. I looked round, but there were none, I grabbed the SMG and put it on my back, then got a pistol and riot sheild and put them on my back too. I followed the map to the hangar, and the first thing I noticed was the brand spanking new transport ship. The reds had some of the most advanced tehcnology on this side of the galaxy, but I'd seen nothing like this, rather than the typical 1 rocket system, this ship had 2 on either side, and a hatch on the bottom.
(3 solid: This is about the time dropships were first introduced.)
I walked under it and climbed up, it had 8 seats on each side and a pilot seat, which was odd, our rockets just relied on brain to rocket connection. I got in the pilot seat and realised I had no diea how to fly one of these. I didn't understnad the joystick, I couldn't find ho to start it up. So tried to climb out, but I only got to the passenger section before another green clone attempted to climb in and saw me. Apparently, they have strict schedules for rocket and dropship use, since he stared shooting me, I grabbed my riot shield and held it out on front of me while I tried to climb back in the pilot seat. I got in and pressed random buttons, the engines started, the dropship lifted up and Then, I don't even know what happened, All I know is, the dropship had left the other clone behind and I was now sideways halfway down a mountain. I shot the hatch open and climbed out. I looked down at the bottom of the hill, there were a group of reds nearby. I was about to wave to signal I was a red too, then something really unlucky happened.
"BRAIN TO CLONE TAKE OVER.. INITIATED!"
"What's a brain to-"
I couldn't talk anymore than that, I couldn't move, the brain had complete control over me. I aimed my SMG and fired, I killed them all. After I regainde control, I took off my helmet, and aimed my pistol at the brain connection thing. I shot it, it hurt like heck, but alteast now I wouldn't kill my own again. The only problem was, I had no BTCC (abbreviated due to me saying it so much) which meant I wasn't on the reds or the greens, and they both would attack me if the brain couldn't connect to me. I was solo now. I looked up to the sky and saw something... Odd. Robots weren't very common, and they prefered to fight alone, and on the ground. So why was there a platoon of robots flying over head?....

Data log: Day 3


I woke up, I'd been sleeping in that odd transport I found for a while now. It was nighttime, the fighting had stopped. I got up and grabbed the SMG off my back. Note to self: Never sleep while still wearing armor and guns. I looked round, no-one there. I walked out of the dropship and heard 5 guns being loaded behind me. I turned round and saw the robots from before. They each had a long cannon. I dropped my SMG and put my hands up. The first robot walked up to me, it was a robot 2, the others were robot 1s. It looked at me, then turned its head sideways, I heard the gears clicking and whirring, and I saw some of them too. It turend its head back straight, then walked round me and looked at my back, it walked back in front of me, the put the long cannon away. I lowered my arms, it pulled out another gun and aimed at my head, I heard plasma or something charging inside, I closed my eyes and waited, I heard a loud lazer-type noise, then opened my eyes, nothing had happened.
"Wha..?"
The robot and the others flew away. I touched the spot on my head where it fired, there was a burn and a dent there, but it didn't penetrate the helmet.
"What the?... Wait.. Maybe they're looking for survivors.."
Then I wondered when I started talking to myself. I grabbed my SMG off the floor and headed off in a random direction. Maybe I could join one of the teams... No.. They would both kill me. I heard something behind me, I turned round, nothing. Hm.. I carried on walking, when I heard it again. I turned round again, still nothing.
"Hello?"
Nothing replied. I was about to take another step but I quickly turned round, and saw a clone had been following me the whole time. His armor was like a green clones armor, but it had been painted brown.
"Who're you?"
The clone sighed.
"I'm a member of a small group of clones trying to end this war."
"It would end much faster if the reds would get some more robots."
"No, we don't want either side to win. The reds are unorganised, and low tech."
"No, the greens are like that."
"Then why don't the reds have any AK-47s? Or dropships? Or that many robot-"
"OKAY! Okay.. So we're low tech. What about the greens?"
"Smart, calculating, but they're ruthless. They'll kill anyone who gets in they're way. Even their own."
"So, what do you want to do about it?"
"The greens have made a new weapon, called the Doom."
"Thats creative."
"Ssh, the Doom is some kind of bomb. It's handheld, but is powerful enough to take out a planet."
"How did the greens get technology like that?"
"I don't know. Before this war, they were just as low tech as you were told, but they started to get all this new stuff from nowhere."
"Hm.. So, what about the Doom?"
"The greens were scanning it, inspecting it, they were trying to find out how to make more. But the reds stole it during this battle."
"So, you plan to get the Doom and create your own?"
"No, we plan to destroy it. After the greens got the Doom the whole war was about them."
"I did notice we had some last minute changes to the battle plan."
"If we destroy the Doom, the war will have no purpose, both sides will get scared, and the war will be over."
"No."
"What?"
"The reds don't think like that, you said the greens were ruthless, the reds acknoledge that, and always told us that, the red army is trying to stop them doing something like killing eachother.
"So we need to discorage the reds.."
"We could kill the brain."
"Of course, kill the top brain, the others will get scared and stop fighting!"
"All we need to do know is find out where the reds are keeping the Doom."
"follow me."
(That conversation confused me too, just try to remember whos talking.)
The clone walked away, and I followed. This was going to be a looong war.


Data log: Day 4

I'd been following the clone for some time now. It was daytime again, and I was getting annoyed.
"Are we even going anywhere?"
"Just keep moving."
"Hang on, thats my crashed thingy, over there! We've been going round in circles!"
An anime teardrop appeared on the clones head.
"Um.. Well."
"What?"
"I forgot where the base is.."
"WHAT!?"
"I'll find it in a second.. Just let me figure out where I am."
"This is ridiculous." Look, swap helmets, mines got a minimap."
He looked at me, then took off his helmet and gave it to me, he wasn't a green clone, I could tell that from his face, he had blonde hair, he was clearly a blue clone. I took off my helmet and gave it to him too, I put on his, it was probably either homemade, or really old, it smelled horrible and it was flexible. Which wasn't good.
"Thanks, thats much better. Lets see.. this looks familiar.. This way!"
I followed him again, but the inside of the helmet was dirty and I couldn't see him properly, it was hard enough to follow him as it was. We got to a cave and we swapped helmets back. He walked inside, then signalled it was safe. I walked inside myself, it was dark. I heard someone clap and the lights turned on, it looked like an old abandoned hangar. There was a blue clone, the brown clone, and a giant robot with a blue clone head. The robo-clone waved at the brown clone.
"Hey! you got a new guy!"
His voice was robotic, but still sounded like a clone.
"Newbie, this is Blue and Grey"
"I guess I'm now green then."
"Yeah."
"So, whats with grey?"
Grey looked at me with an odd expression on his face.
"I don't like to talk about it."
I noticed his mouth didn't move when he spoke, but a light on his chest did in sync with his talking.
"Is this all you have?"
"Pretty much."
"An empty hangar, a cyborg, 3 clones, and thats it?"
"We've got a weapon cache in anohter cave, plus, our leader."
"Leader?"
"A red clone, or atleast thats what they say."
"Whats so special about them?"
"We-"
"Hey boys!"
A girl walked in, she was wearing red armor, she had blonde hair which flowed round down to her hips. She clearly had the DNA of a blue clone, she had customized her armor to show that she was a woman, you could tell it was a her even if she had a helmet on, speaking of which, she held one under her arm, it was a basic green clone helmet, but painted red.
"Whats going on? Ah, I see you've got a new guy."
"ZOMGB-"
The brown clone put his hand over my mouth before I could finish (3 Solid: Damnit!)
"Red, this is green."
"Hmm.. Green clone, green army armor, basic equipment... Better than what we've got."
"What do you mean?"
"Someone found our weapon cache, the whole things gone."
"What!?"
We all said that last word in unison. Except the blue clone who simply widened his eyes.
"Yup, worse, they broke my helmet."
She threw her helmet to the ground, the back of it was destroyed, and the remains were singed.
"How?"
"I don't know, I took it off and wen-"
"I told you not to take your helmet off in a battlefield."
I turned round, brown was angry.
"Your not my father-"
"I'm the closest thing you got right now."
"Actaully, greys closer."
"He's almost as unresponcible as you!"
Grey walked in between them.
"Lay off brown, if she takes her helmet off and dies, she dies."
"And if she dies, we loose another man."
"Woman."
"We loose another clone. I don't want her to end up like...."
"Like me."
Brown was silent. Grey turned to red.
"If you want to stay alive, keep your helmet on, just not that one, it's a bit knackered."
Grey walked up t me and put his hand on my shoulder, I had to struggle to make sure I didn't fall over.
"Welcome to the team... This is pretty much a normal day here."
Grey lifted his hand off of my shoulder and I nearly sighed in relief. He walked outside and just stood there, watching the horizon.
"Come on green. We need to get some sleep, we've been out there all day and night."
I turned round, brown was still there. I nodded, I picked a spot on the cold metal ground.

Better than nothing.

Data log: Day 5
When I woke up today I lay on the ground for a few seconds before I got up. I wondered if the sort of thing that happened to me happens often... Or if it was just a dream. Judging from the rusted hangar floor above me, probably not. I got up, and realised I slept with my SMG on again (Do'h!) I got up and stretched, It was actually still nightime, red and grey were asleep, though I wasn't entirely sure if you would call recharing overnight "sleeping". Brown was staring at the moon outside. I joined him
Brown: "Oh, hi."
(3 Solid: Yup, I got script style writing now. Do you like it?)
"Hi."
(3 Solid: This is first person, I thought it would make sence if the clone didn't have a scripty thing."
Brown: "So, what do you think?"
"What do you mean?"
Brown: "About us, the group and the hangar."
"The hangars dirty, and you guys... Are a bit... Arguementive."
Brown: "Thought so, first impressions aren't always right. But that was. Red doesn't seem to care for her own safety, Grey has skin that can survive most small firearms, so he's the same. But more weapons are being invented, new ways of killing are being discovered, everything just as vunerable as everything else."
"Thats a very grim way of looking at things."
Brown: "It just means we're all alike."
"Right..."
(3 Solid: Maybe I should add a scripty thing for clone #1337.. Lets try it out.)
Me: "Did you hear something?"
Brown: "No."
Me: "Hm.. Could have sworn I heard someone talking."
Brown: "It was nothing."
I stayed silent. I watched the night with him.
Me: "So, whats the plan?"
Brown: "We need a dropship, or alot of rockets. We need to steal some."
Me: "So, sneak into the green base and steal some?"
Brown: "Yup."
I didn't reply, I watched the night for another few seconds, then I wnet back inside, before I got back to sleep, I looked at Red. I examined everything about her, the hair, the thighs, the.. Chest. I wasn't being a pervert, and I certainly wasn't in love, clones normally were male, and no-one had seen a female for about... Since humans became brains. That was aloooong time ago. I took my gear off of my back (I remembered this time!) and lay down, before closing my eyes and falling asleep...
(3 Solid: Yeah, not much happened, but it gives you an idea of the situation, and shows off my brand spanking new talky things!)


Data log: Day 6

When I woke up this time, I woke up outside tied to something metal. It was moving.
"Hey!"
The metal thing stopped moving and Brown came round.
Brown: "Sorry, we didn't want to wake you up."
"Well get me down!"
Brown untied the rope holding me up and helped me down, then he gave me an SMG. I was actually tied to Grey's back.
"Why are we in such a hurry?"
Brown: "The whole green army is mining right now, we can go in, grab a dropship and get ot of here before they even know we exist."
"Why are they all mining?"
Brown: "It doesn't matter, lets go."
We headed to the green base (The minimap in my helmet had an arrow pointing to it) and, just as brown had said, it was empty. We walked inside, the others had their weapons on their backs and seemed very calm about this. Unlike them, I had my gun ready.
"Guys, get your weapons out."
Red: "Green, you heard Brown, the greens are gone, this is safe."
"It seems too much like a trap to not be one."
Grey: "Come on, you expect the greens to hide? Even if this is a trap, I've got the same alloy they make cruiser ships out of!"
"What about the Titanic III? That was destroyed easily!"
Grey: "Well we're not fighting meteors are we?"
"Whatever."
Brown didn't say anything but he grabbed his SMG off of his back.
We headed to the hangar, I lead the way, as I was the only one with a minimap. When I opened the hangar door, I found something I had expected the whole time.
"It's a trap."
The hangar was full of robots, each one had an AK-47. I dropped my SMG, as did Brown, grey was going to fight, but he dropped his gun too (and what a gun it was! long cannon FTW!) after he remembered AK-47 rounds could pierce even his metal. Red didn't even have her gun out. Suddenly, something small and green came out of nowhere and landed in the middle of the robots.
"What the?"
The little thing was infact, a grenade, it blew up, destroying most of the robots, the blue clone from before jumped down with an SMG and shot the remaining robots. Then he turned to us.
"Thanks!"
He didn't reply. He got in a rocket and flew out by himself.
"Where's he going?"
Brown: "Blues an odd one. He won't talk to anyone, and sometimes you forget he's even there."
Me and brown got in a dropship by ourselves while red and grey took another. We flew up, and for once, things were going our way. Atleast, for now.


Data log: Day 7


I groaned and opened my eyes, I'd fallen asleep inside the dropship. Ow, I left my SMG on again! I got up.
"Brown, you can take a rest now, I'm awake."
Brown: "Don't worry about it, go back to sleep."
"You need to rest, just as much as I do."
Brown: "I'm fine!"
"You didn't go to sleep the night before we went to the green base either!"
Brown: "Seriously, I'm.."
He yawned.
Brown: "...Ok, maybe I am tired."
"Come on, you need your rest too."
Brown: "....Fine."
Brown got pressed a button on the control panel and climbed down, I climbed up to the drivers seat and tried to work out how to drive. I grabbed the joystick and pushed it forwards, that seemed to work. I held it forwards and the dropship continually moved forwards.
"This is easy!"
I heard a weird beeping noise coming from a speaker on the controls. I pressed a little button next to it (in the hopes that would make it stop) and I heard Red talking through the speaker.
Red: "Well, atleast the radio works. Who is this?"
"Green here. What is it?"
Red: "An asteroid field."
"What!?"
Red: "It's huge, no way around it."
"Damnit!"
I heard grey say something, but I couldn't quite tell what he said.
Red: "Grey says hi."
"Tell him hi back."
Red: "Just keep together and away from the asteroids."
"But-"
Console: "Message ended."
I only knew how to move forwards! How was I supposed to dodge asteroids!?
"Brown?"
I heard him mumble, he was asleep.
"Brown!"
Brown: "Wha?"
"We're heading towards an asteroid field, and I still don't know how to drive.
Brown: "Use the joystick."
"How!?"
I heard him mumble again. No good. I moved the joystick slowly to the left, the dropship moved to the left. Well, that makes sense. Then I looked at a little screen that showed what was around me, it was just like those little games they gave us while we were still children. Only much more dangerous, and no green clones in rockets trying to kill me. Something hit the side of the dropship.
"Argh."
Ok, now it was just like those old games, the rockets had the hatch open on one side, and green clones with some kind of breathing thingy attached to the helmet were shooting us with it's SMGs, It was hard enough to dodge without being shot at!
Brown: "Let me drive"
"Now your awake!"
Brown: "How could I sleep with your driving?"
"Ok, take the whe- Um.. Stick."
I got out of the driver seat and Brown quickly jumped in, he swerved all around, It was hard just to stand up!
"Hypocrite!"
Brown: "I'm trying to shake them, but rockets are much faster in space."
"So, what do we do?"
Brown: "Get a breather on and give me one too."
I looked around, there were small breather things attached to the wall, I grabbed one and clamped it onto my helmet, then clamped one of Brown's for him.
Brown: "Now put on those special boots."
"How do you know this dropship even has those?2
Brown: "Every dropship has those!"
I looked round again, on the other wall was, indeed some weird boot things, I put them ontop of my ordinary boots. The weird boot things stuck to the ground like magnets.
Brown: "Hold on to your SMG!"
I grabbed my SMG off of my back and Brown opened the hatch underneath me, the gravity field that normally kept everything inside the dropship from flying away disappeared and all the air was sucked out, I was being kept alive by the breather and the boot things. I walked outside and onto the surface of the dropship. I heard the hatch close behind me, I aimed and fired at the clone, I got him right in th head, but he shot my arm.
"AH! ****! That ****ing hurts!"
I saw the blood, without the gravity it looked really weird. More rockets came. I shot all of them but I took another shot to the arm and another to the leg.
"Brown! Help!"
I heard the hatch open again, I ran back inside, the hatch closed once I was back inside. I heard the air being put back in by the machinery, I took off my breather.
"Brown, I've been hit."
Brown pressed a button on the controls and came down to me.
Brown: "Ouch.. Well, I don't have any medical training, or any medical equipment. We'll have to deal with that later."
"Brown, I'm loosing alot of blood here.."
Brown looked round, then ripped a bit of his sleeve off and wrapped that round my leg
"Aargh.."
Brown: "Sorry"
He then he did the same to my arm.
"Augh.. That really hurts."
Brown: "I'm sorry, but thats the best I can do."
"It's better than nothing."
I heard some beeping from the controls again. Brown clearly heard it too, he got back up to the pilot seat and pressed the button.
Red: "Hey! Are you guys alright?"
Brown: "Green's been hit."
Red: "Damn."
Brown: "I covered the wounds, but I don't know what to do from there."
I felt weak, I lay down against the wall.
Red: "Is he bleeding?"
"WHAT DO YOU THINK!?"
Red: "I'll take that as a yes..."
Brown: "He'll be fine."
I started to feel tired. I tried to stay awake, but I couldn't.
Red: "Tell him hi for me."
I closed my eyes.
Brown: "See you later."
Red: "Bye."
That was the last I heard before I fell unconscious.


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Orindells story

Survival

Chapter One

Ouch.I opened my eyes.There was blood on my hands and my amour.Crap.The memory of what happened came ruching back to me.It was me and another Red Clone in the Rocket.We landed OK but after walking for 10 mins we came under fire.When they started throughing Frag Shells I dived into cover in a nearby Crater.The other Clone was not so lucky.He got ripped up bad.It looked like the end for me when out the blue a Squad of blue clone's jetpacked down opened fire with their Pistol's and SMG on the enemy's postion.They took down two of them before the rest ran off.
Clone 1287:Are you all right?
Me:I'm fine.Thanks for that!I thought that my number was up!
Clone 1287:Well then follow me!
And so we fly towards the Red camp,stopping every few mins to rest our Jetpacks.We made it their about 9:00.I rested for 2 hours.I was about to go to sleep when they attacked.Their were 20 of them,So we had more than twice as many clones.We should have taken tham easyily but they had these metal sheilds that stopped our Bullets.Man they ripped us apart!When they got close enough they tosed Frags at us.And if that was not bad enough these big things with two engins came down from the sky,lettind out enemy soldiers.I ran away.I admit it.I was scared witless.The problem was that after a 5 mins a stray Long Canon round explouded next to me.The shrapnel hit me in the chest and shoulder.Then I passed out.
And so that brought me to were I am now.Time to go I said myself


Chapter 2

And so I have ended up wandering around the forest,looking for other Red's.Thats when I saw it.It was one those big two engine things.It looked like it had crashed into a tree.It was just low enough for me to climb in if I wanted to.But first I checked my SMG.It was wrecked.I looked like a bit shrapnel from the Long Canon shell hit it.I threw it away.Then I climbed into the...Thing.I saw that unlike our rockets it had a pilot seat.Everyone inside was dead,but by now I was used to death.I found and AK-47 on one of the dead clones.On the pilots control panel it said ''DropShip 1.0''.Suddenly a hail of what sounded like shotgun pellets hit the DropShip.I waited a few secs for the second shot but none came.I hoped out and began to run.I looked around briefly and saw it was just a skelie with a....Blunderbuss???I would have to look into this.
I ran for 5 mins before I stopped.Then it hit me!Why had the Brain not been giving me orders?I checked my uplink,but it was fine.I started to get worried so I sat down and tried really hard to contact our brain.Then I heard a voice in my head,But it was not the brains voice.It said ''Brain to Clone link dameged'' How?I said ''The is a an EMP brain blocker on planet.Its location is...'' Then the voice began to fade in and out.Well it looked like I was on my own.


Chapter 3

I kept walking until suddenely there was a huge crater in front of me.I looked in and saw a crashed rockit.I jumped into the crater and walked over to the rockit.I reached to open the door...
Red clone:Stop!
What?
Red clone:Its booby-trapped.I rigged a grenade to go off when someone opened the door.
Why did you do that?
Red clone:Why do think I do it?To kill Green's.
Oh...Yeah.Right.
Red clone:Is your link off as well?
Yep.Want to help me out of this hole?
Then he helped me out the crater.He told me that he never made it to the camp.I told him that he was luckey.Then he told me that he had seen a strange group of clones making their way to the green HQ.He told me that must be more Reds making their way to the HQ to kill Green's.I was not so sure but did not tell him that.And so we headed off to the Green HQ.And that was that.

chapter 4:

And so I ended walking towards my enemys HQ with clone that I think has been out in the sun too long.About ten mins later he stopped.Then,very suddenly,he pulled me to the ground with him.
What the f**k our you doing?
Red Clone:Shhhhhhh!
What?
(In a whisper)Red Clone:Their is a patrol of robots a few meters ahead of us.
Why didnt I hear them?
(In a whisper)Red Clone:They are jetpacking pretty high up in the air.
Ah!Oh...And you never told me your name?Mine is 1327.I'm from Alpha Company.
(In a whisper)Red Clone:Mine is 6967.I'm from Delta Company.
Then we got and continued walking.Delta Company.....Delta Company.....Where had I heard that before?Then it hit me!Delta Company had been the first to land on the planet.Thats not a big deal on its own but then we suddenly lost all contact with them.When we sent a rockit down to check it out Delta Company shot it down!This guy was probaly just waiting to kill me!But why had he saved me when i was about to open that rockits door?Maybe there was somthing in the rockit that he did not want me to see.This was all very confusing.Its time I got some answers!And so I aimed my gun at him and said:
Stop!Put down your gun!
6967:What the hell are you doing!!!Put that away!
What?Some you can kill me traitor!No!Now what do want at the green HQ!
6967:Look....you dont understand....its complicated.
Then a shot rang out.But it was not me or him.So who was it?Then I looked up and a Robot with a Shotgun slowly circling us.I began to fire at him with my AK.I got luckey and hit his jetpack.He went flying into the ground.Then I noticed that 6967 was lying on thr ground,and from the look of it did not have much time.I ran over to him:
Wait!Dont die!I dont want to be alone!
(Blood coming out of mouth at same time)6967:Go.....Find the others..... Stop the war!


Chapter 5

And so I held the closest thing I ever had to friend in my arms,as he died.But what others?The rest of Delta Compny?The strange group that made their way to the Green HQ?I dont know.Maybe I never will.But since its the closest I decied to make my to the Green HQ.I made it there without any trouble.There was four Green Clone's guarding the main entrance.It was to many for to take on myself so I tossed a grenade at them.They must have either had nerves of steel or just been plain stupid because they just sat there untill it exploded killing them all.I ran as fast as I could through the Front Door and continued running until I reached an armoury.I walked in and was amazed at the amount of guns they had in there.I walked over to one of the racks and picked up five frags,AK 47 ammo,a pistol and one of those sheild things that I placeds on my back.I then ran to the nearest hanger bay.Inside there was only one rocket left.I walked over to and then rembered that the brains always piloted the rockets.Crap.But I had some computer skills so I set to work fixing the rocket up so that I could fly it.Just as I finished a patrol of Green's walked by.They began to fire at me so I took the sheild thing and ran to the rocket.I then simpliely flipped a few swithes and oof I went after the ''Others''.


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Is this story conected in any way to the other one?


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Not really. :)

I changed the name after I remembered that this clone is quite expirienced. This is not his first blood.


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Im excited! I like these stories! :grin:
That clone is kinda toast btw.


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I think that this is a very good story!If you want to do story's for the other story then I think the would be OK.


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Another great story, nice job.


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Wait, I want to check If my timeline is right, did the skelies come before or after the dropships?


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Around the same time.


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About the right timeline then. Oh, updated.


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This is a really good story.Are you gonna release any mods based ofa it?


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I made a red clone head! :D


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And I feel inspired to make a green clone with his helmet off!

EDIT: And I did!


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Great story.. BUT WE NEED MOAR!!!! RAAAAWWWR!!! Oh, and this is getting a mod based off of it right? RIGHT?


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This should end up being an excellent story. 3 things; 1. A small suggestion, you should come up with a way to understand who is talking better. 2. What kind of robot body is Grey on. 3. Why would there be female clones for war (not trying to be sexist) wouldn't they just use one DNA template.


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to distract the other clones using huge breast genes... only messing. I like it, keep it up.


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