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Joined: Fri Oct 27, 2006 8:35 pm Posts: 167 Location: Bradford, England 
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  Nfsjunkie91 wrote: By the way, age has nothing to do with spelling. Thirteen year olds can be perfectly competent, but instead choose to be ignorant. List of things wrong: No capitalization. Lack of proper punctuation and grammar. Improper spelling. Story told from a "bad" point of view. All these things come together to make this story... GENERALLY UNINTERESTING! I'm 13 years old and i use proper grammar and spelling, even on MSN and the likes. |
| Tue Jul 10, 2007 4:04 pm |
 
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 Joined: Sat May 05, 2007 6:04 pm Posts: 2901
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Morbo! wrote: Nfsjunkie91 wrote: By the way, age has nothing to do with spelling. Thirteen year olds can be perfectly competent, but instead choose to be ignorant. List of things wrong: No capitalization. Lack of proper punctuation and grammar. Improper spelling. Story told from a "bad" point of view. All these things come together to make this story... GENERALLY UNINTERESTING! I'm 13 years old and i use proper grammar and spelling, even on MSN and the likes. That post is EPIC FAILURE. Because, you know, for one you didn't read the post, and for two you didn't use proper grammar. |
| Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:09 pm |
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 Joined: Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:35 am Posts: 3778 Location: Largo, Florida
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metal chao wrote: Morbo! wrote: Nfsjunkie91 wrote: By the way, age has nothing to do with spelling. Thirteen year olds can be perfectly competent, but instead choose to be ignorant. List of things wrong: No capitalization. Lack of proper punctuation and grammar. Improper spelling. Story told from a "bad" point of view. All these things come together to make this story... GENERALLY UNINTERESTING! I'm 13 years old and i use proper grammar and spelling, even on MSN and the likes. That post is EPIC FAILURE. Because, you know, for one you didn't read the post, and for two you didn't use proper grammar. |
| Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:10 pm |
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Joined: Fri Oct 27, 2006 8:35 pm Posts: 167 Location: Bradford, England
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The lowercase 'I' doesn't really matter, to me at least. People accept it as gramatically correct.
EDIT: Anyway, screw grammar for now (If you wanna argue about the 'i/I' take it to PMs.). Clone, try to improve your general storywriting. It just leaps in from absolutely nowhere. Try to write an introduction. Make the characters more distinguished. Also use more descriptive sentences. Describe the planet he's on, his surroundings, ect. I'm hoping you improve this story, but try to be unique as this is just looking like a copy of 'The Life And Death Of Clone 4.1.21.19.19'. A shoddy one at that. Last edited by Morbo! on Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:46 pm, edited 1 time in total. |
| Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:41 pm |
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Joined: Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:35 am Posts: 3778 Location: Largo, Florida
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Morbo! wrote: The lowercase 'I' doesn't really matter, to me at least. People accept it as gramatically correct. |
| Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:42 pm |
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 Joined: Fri Apr 06, 2007 12:27 pm Posts: 181 Location: Ireland du nord
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story stealing? Why because its about a clone in CC? What about my story.. the first of these stories. If that is the case. Then dauss stole my story... Venn just shut up for a while. Perhaps its uninteresting and perhaps it is badly wrote. But at least he tried to do something... Ill stop before I say something stupid.
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| Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:53 pm |
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 Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm Posts: 620 Location: CONTRACTIONS I DONT NEED CONTRACTIONS
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Guys, this disgusts me. You people are acting like complete jackasses and pigs. Show some respect for once. And this is ripping of Dauss' story how? Clones have numbers, not names, and clones are a big part of Cortex Command. That's like yelling "UN-ORIGINAL" at a Halo fan-fiction for having Master Chief in it.
Just tell him what he needs to fix, and stop being complete clowns. All of you. |
| Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:02 pm |
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 Joined: Sun Dec 03, 2006 4:00 am Posts: 578 Location: America
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Jack The Llama Commando wrote: Guys, this disgusts me. You people are acting like complete jackasses and pigs. Show some respect for once. And this is ripping of Dauss' story how? Clones have numbers, not names, and clones are a big part of Cortex Command. That's like yelling "UN-ORIGINAL" at a Halo fan-fiction for having Master Chief in it. Just tell him what he needs to fix, and stop being complete clowns. All of you. Agreed. |
| Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:07 pm |
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