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Janto
Joined: Tue Apr 10, 2007 12:26 pm
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Chapter 5 is up!
Please comment if you like or hate! i need either bad!
Please people who are following comment on each chapter. Thanks for any advice.
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| Thu May 10, 2007 4:26 pm |
 
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Dauss
A HUMAN BRAIN, SAFELY INSULATED FROM THE TERRORS OF HYPERSPACE
Joined: Sun Jan 28, 2007 8:54 pm
Posts: 1070
Location: Somewhere beyond the endless sea of hyperspace, fighting for your right to call a planet home.
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Meh, you're right, it is short.
Assuming I can guess what happens next, this is going alone the lines of quake 4. 
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| Thu May 10, 2007 4:37 pm |
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Janto
Joined: Tue Apr 10, 2007 12:26 pm
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He was knocked out, not alot to write about!
Chapter 6 is going to be longer than Hope Vally, never played quake
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| Thu May 10, 2007 4:38 pm |
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Janto
Joined: Tue Apr 10, 2007 12:26 pm
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Chapter 6 done!
Thanks to Dauss for constructive critasim 
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| Thu May 10, 2007 7:48 pm |
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Janto
Joined: Tue Apr 10, 2007 12:26 pm
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Mods, if there is no reply in 24 hours asking for me to keep writing can you take this thread down.
Thanks
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| Sun May 13, 2007 8:35 am |
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Elpolodiablo
Joined: Sat Dec 23, 2006 12:37 pm
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MORE!!!!!! now1!!!111!
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| Sun May 13, 2007 8:37 am |
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Janto
Joined: Tue Apr 10, 2007 12:26 pm
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Im just weired out, if you dont like the story tell me please!
Everyone who has posted has said positive things but noone is commenting after new chapters, exception Duass.
But other storys have lively posters, so tell me everyone, Hows my writing!!!1One11
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| Sun May 13, 2007 8:41 am |
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Elpolodiablo
Joined: Sat Dec 23, 2006 12:37 pm
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I like it. its very poetic and evocative,
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| Sun May 13, 2007 8:47 am |
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Janto
Joined: Tue Apr 10, 2007 12:26 pm
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Ok, ill write Chapter 7 even if it is just for you 
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| Sun May 13, 2007 9:17 am |
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Elpolodiablo
Joined: Sat Dec 23, 2006 12:37 pm
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Y thankyou.
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Linongion
Joined: Tue Feb 15, 2005 6:06 pm
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Location: Canada
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Well done, I rather like it.
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