OH NOEZ I'M EVIL!!!!

can i be in it please ill give you a cookie

Well, Carpet Ninja I'm gonna have to turn you down, I have so many characters It is EXTREMLY hard to give everyone adequete "screen time" and the last thing I need is someone else on the squad, so sorry .

And for everyone who actually regualry checks the story (Dauss seems to get all the publicity but his is better in most ways; cheers to you Dauss ) forgive me for the lack of chapters, I've had alot of schoolwork to do before the end of the school year, studying for exams, a HUGE church garage sale that I have to work on, and other problems. I only hope people haven't given up hope on the story, I am back into the swing of writing (my last few chapters have been; in my opinion, utter crap) and from now on everything is going to be better, . Thanks for all the support so far guys, and couch.

P.S. No Holy you are not evil, just Sneeky

but i could be an assasin that attacks a member of the squad ( i dont care if i kill them or not )

and i could die very soon

Yet again, all I'm thinking is that there's dialog between dauss and yourself... Those were the only two names that I remembered from the chapter(off the bat). I'd have to think again to remember others.

Still good though.
Also gives me something to look forward to during school.

Next Chapter Plez!!!!!

Chapter 12 is out, its a little short and alot of people wern't used, so im sorry, but the upcoming chapters will have everyone having their one story. I already have chapter 13 written down, I'll type it out tomorrow, unless that is you really want it today .

Yay, moar story. I'm sure we really want it today, but you don't have to if you don't want to.

Updated, Chapter 13 is a logistical chapter setting up for a 6-7 chapter side story, with everyone highlighted specialy, sorry if it seems boring, but I needed a logistic chapter to tell you what was going to happen.

can i be a geust appearence?

Argh! I'm sorry guys but I can't add anymore people now, I might throw ya in if I have time, so just PM me some stats about what you want your guy to be like (weapons, type of actor, personality, etc.) and I'll PM you back if I can put you in, this goes for anyone who wants to be in the story! Please stop putting "I want to be in the story" posts here, I'm sorry but I just want people to post what you think about the story, so I can see what people like/want improved, this dosen't mean I don't want your character just I would perfer it in a PM.

Thank you in advance,

I think that Orindell might want to be in the thick of the action *Hint*Hint*

Trust me we all will be .

I'm interested...

I've noticed, by the way, that you writing has become more descriptive since chapter 1, furhter reinforcing my opinion that the more casual writing one endurs, the better he becomes.

Keep it up.

Include me and win a $100,000 dollar bill.

(how ya going to include kirby in a sci-fi shooter story? huh? HUH?)