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 Born for battle [Open Fanfic][Not accepting new characters] 
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CROBO INFO MOVED

In the spirit of keeping this thread clean I've posted all the Crobo information and history in it's own thread. Anybody who wants to RP as a Crobo please read this to stay true to the way I imagined the Crobos.

http://www.datarealms.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=5109

Thank you :smile:


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Tue Jun 05, 2007 7:30 pm
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Name : Zack 294
Appearance : Jet Black spartan
Age : 29
Weapons (duh): Spartan Laser, Brute Spiker x2, Plasma Grenades, Bubble Shield (equip)
Side (red, green, or none) : Green


Tue Jun 05, 2007 7:32 pm
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Hey that makes 8 writers.

I was thinking about joining... ah well.


Tue Jun 05, 2007 7:37 pm
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As a spartan, Zack (#294) usually didn't complain about things like this. But at this point, he was about ready to hand somebody thier ass on a silver platter with garnish.
"Spartan 294, come in"
"294 here, go ahead Alpha"
"We have reports of hostile Greys in the area, Gamma needs backup, over"
"Roger Alpha, I'm on it"
As he closed the connection, three explosions erupted right next to him. He rolled to the side, quickly turned around, and had hardly believed what he had seen. In front of him, was a large metal monstrosity that, from the looks of it, could tear him in two. It had heavy, well polished armor plating, a large futuristic cannon, and a small red strip of red light for eyes.
"Hello you big Bastard..."
The cannon it held started to bleed energy. He quicky sprinted towards the monstrosity, took out a grenade, activated it, and chucked it at his target. The grenade locked on the robot's arm, and detonated with a flash.
*******To Be Continued In A Moment*******

Am I doing this right?


Tue Jun 05, 2007 8:15 pm
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I like it, write more I want to know what happens =P


Tue Jun 05, 2007 8:19 pm
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I think that capnbubs should be allowed to join. I would even go as far to let take my place.


Tue Jun 05, 2007 8:46 pm
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It's ok Orindell I think I'm gonna have my work cut out writing about the Crobos in my own thread!


Tue Jun 05, 2007 8:52 pm
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******* CONTINUED *******
The grenade had engulfed the machine in a thick cloud of dust. Spartan 294 skidded to a stop, aimed his two spike rifles at the cloud, and waited for the enevitable counter attack. The dust cleared, and the robot was nowhere to be seen. "Huh, guess he wasn't as strong as I th-".As if on cue, the ground beneath the spartan exploded in a plume of blue smoke, sending him flyng a couple meters.

He landed hard, and slowly got up. "...damn". He retrieved the weapon from his back, knelt down, and mashed the trigger. A large red dot appeared at the muzzle of the weapon and started to grow. "Let's see how you like this freak". The behemoth saw the spartan charging his weapon and leapt forward with suprising agility. "That's right you ugly bastard, come and get it". The machine was almost within arm's length, when the laser erupted and blew it away. The mangled machine landed a good 20 yards away in a heap and exploded in a dazzling fireball. The spartan made sure the thing was dead, lodged a couple spikes in it's body, and radioed Alpha Squad.

"Spartan 294 to Alpha, come in, what's your status?
"Spartan, this is Alpha-....-need backup immediately-....-tuation dire, over."
"Hold on Alpha, I'm on the way!"

He severed the connection, checked his equipment, (which consisted of the laser, two spike rifles, plasma grenades and an odd device command hadn't briefed him on) and started running in the direction of Alpha Squad. The battle here was far from over...


Tue Jun 05, 2007 9:26 pm
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hah that was cool. Blam! laser to the face :)

I like the style of your writing


Tue Jun 05, 2007 9:30 pm
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Why thanks, I thought about making my own fanfic, but I don't know if I can do a whole one though....

Somebody else's turn for a few.


Tue Jun 05, 2007 9:33 pm
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I'm not in top form, but here's my shot:

-Strange Aeons-
Speak to any veteran, and they'll tell you that time seems to slow down in a battle. Medical experts pass this off as adrenaline rushing through the body. The more superstitious and cynical of the veterans believe that Death just likes to watch every gory detail.

This is also the time when many veterans claim to have witnessed an entity colloquially known as "The Jester". Descriptions number as many as the individuals themselves, but common traits include him an impossible height, the average being around 2 meters tall, but despite his height, graceful in his movements. He appears to be not just covered in, but dripping blood. The hearts of test subjects (when placed in identical, controlled scenarios) have been known to simply stop from a massive cardiac arrest. (Even subjects in peak physical condition suffer from this)

With The Jester appears "The Fallen". Like The Jester, the appearance of The Fallen differ from soldier to soldier; some describing them as ghastly beings, not even fit for the seventh circle of Hell (thus leading to the second name, "Hell's Rejects") others describing them as resembling blood-splattered angels, stranded on Earth as punishment for some untold sin.

The overall effect, as mentioned before, is the same, a massive and fatal cardiac arrest.

The only known clue to this strange phenomena is the dying words of the victims, identified as a quote from a book by one "H.P. Lovecraft":

"That is not dead which can eternal lie,
And with strange aeons even death may die."

Leading experts in the fields of medicine and psychology are baffled by this strange occurrence, and can draw no correlation between the appearance of The Jester and The Fallen, and this quote.

-PERHAPS TO BE CONTINUED! IT'S YOUR CHOICE!-

- The-Masses


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Its not like I can join. What kind of army wants a pink puffball whoses main weapon is his mouth?


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The robot continued walking, an abandoned bunker lay not too far away. Suddenly, it shuddered and collapsed

> ?
Fuel reserve low.
> Fuel reserve?
15%
> Fuel?
Battery. charged with plasma.
> Plasma nearby?
Scann-ERROR!
> ...nvm
Affir101nmfk apafnaerro1!!

The robot, shaking, got up and walked towards the bunker, it shook the whole way there.

> Possibility of survival?
10% without energy.
> ... Energy nearby?
Scann-ERROARANDO!)"£NASALIOANSNDIAS110100101011
> .. Predictable.
10101010191020013214871

The robot tried to get up again, but it shuddered and fell on it's face. It rolled over and tried again, but it couldn't.

> ... Recharge battery?
1023919301
> Spare battery?
1029481
> Equipment.
1923921one1023901bat0194201tery12039801

The robot reached for it's belt, slowly and weakly, then it grabbed a small capsule, it had a faint green glow. With it's other hand it opened up a small flap on it's wrist, and dropped the capsule, the green light on it's head flashed on and off.

Failure010213421...aofnaonsa
> ...No.

the light on the robots head flashed slightly faster and the robot grabbed the battery and put it over it's wrist, the light flashed so fast it might as well be solid, then, the light stopped, the robot dropped the battery and fell limp... But the battery landed in it's wrist. The flap closed automatically and the light on the robots head slowly flickered back on.

...All systems stable.
> CPU?
CPU fine. 15% damage to unnecessary parts.
> Map?
Map not found.
> ...Scan?
Scanning... Error! Scanner damaged!
> ?

The robot got up and looked at it's back. There was a small metal device attached, and unfortunately, that was the scanner.

> *&@$!!
Censored.
> ...
...

The robot headed to the bunker again, there was an SMG and a door. The robot walked up to the door and it opened automatically, inside was an empty brain room. there were signs of battle but no brain and no remains of one. Now that was odd...


- 3 Solid (even stories need a little color :P )


Wed Jun 06, 2007 4:18 pm
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Name: Commander Gree
Appearence: Custom Mk 2 Kaminoan Clone armor
Age:
Chronologically: 13
Biologically: 26
Weapons: DC-19 Blast Shotgun, 2x modified DC-15 pistols, 7x Thermal Detonators
Side: Peace Seeker Feild Commander?

plz make me? :D


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Sorry guys I've gotta back out for now...just got MLB 07: The show and I have to spend all my time turning myself into a Hall of famer=]


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