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3. Why would there be female clones for war (not trying to be sexist) wouldn't they just use one DNA template.


You see they could create huge amounts of power by captreing the energy released by ZOMG BOOBS!


Thu May 03, 2007 10:24 pm
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OK you guys got a point, what kind of (not gay) guy isnt affected by a woman's WMD (Weapons of Mass Distraction). I think we also need some kind of sub thread for stories and fan fiction so they are all in one place as this might be a big thing in the future.


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Heh good story......

And suddenly a whole new CC Fanchise will be started, involving CC cuddly toys, CC childrens books and even CC Toilet rolls. Why not? Lets merchandise everything and brand it. By the way, this game is always going to be free right? not that i mind paying for it, but i'm sure you aren't meant to say that to the developers. Oh well.


Fri May 04, 2007 1:27 am
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AlphaCommando wrote:
. I think we also need some kind of sub thread for stories and fan fiction so they are all in one place as this might be a big thing in the future.


I totaly agree.And may I make yet another sub-story for this one?Please?


Fri May 04, 2007 8:50 pm
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I havn't been able to get on the comp for a while, so I missed some stuff.
Orindell: Sure. It's fine with me.
Alpha commando: Large, bulky, a bit rusted, claws instead of hands and feet, that sort of thing.
Everyone who was talking about why there is a girl clone: It'll be explained as I go along.
Update in about 5 secs.


Fri May 04, 2007 10:38 pm
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Here is my story

Survival

Chapter One

Ouch.I opened my eyes.There was blood on my hands and my amour.Crap.The memory of what happened came ruching back to me.It was me and another Red Clone in the Rocket.We landed OK but after walking for 10 mins we came under fire.When they started throughing Frag Shells I dived into cover in a nearby Crater.The other Clone was not so lucky.He got ripped up bad.It looked like the end for me when out the blue a Squad of blue clone's jetpacked down opened fire with their Pistol's and SMG on the enemy's postion.They took down two of them before the rest ran off.
Clone 1287:Are you all right?
Me:I'm fine.Thanks for that!I thought that my number was up!
Clone 1287:Well then follow me!
And so we fly towards the Red camp,stopping every few mins to rest our Jetpacks.We made it their about 9:00.I rested for 2 hours.I was about to go to sleep when they attacked.Their were 20 of them,So we had more than twice as many clones.We should have taken tham easyily but they had these metal sheilds that stopped our Bullets.Man they ripped us apart!When they got close enough they tosed Frags at us.And if that was not bad enough these big things with two engins came down from the sky,lettind out enemy soldiers.I ran away.I admit it.I was scared witless.The problem was that after a 5 mins a stray Long Canon round explouded next to me.The shrapnel hit me in the chest and shoulder.Then I passed out.
And so that brought me to were I am now.Time to go I said myself


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Fri May 04, 2007 11:08 pm
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I like the "scripty things" for the others but not for the main character. This little story is soon gonna get gong I hope, btw I you have an eccelent writing style on par with most professionals, keep up the good work! :grin: (P.S. Thats to both of you)


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Fri May 04, 2007 11:17 pm
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Thanks!I will


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Thanks. I would update now, but I just got up and I will probably say something stupid, so I'll do it later.


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Here is chapter two:

Survival

Chapter 2

And so I have ended up wandering around the forest,looking for other Red's.Thats when I saw it.It was one those big two engine things.It looked like it had crashed into a tree.It was just low enough for me to climb in if I wanted to.But first I checked my SMG.It was wrecked.I looked like a bit shrapnel from the Long Canon shell hit it.I threw it away.Then I climbed into the...Thing.I saw that unlike our rockets it had a pilot seat.Everyone inside was dead,but by now I was used to death.I found and AK-47 on one of the dead clones.On the pilots control panel it said ''DropShip 1.0''.Suddenly a hail of what sounded like shotgun pellets hit the DropShip.I waited a few secs for the second shot but none came.I hoped out and began to run.I looked around briefly and saw it was just a skelie with a....Blunderbuss???I would have to look into this.
I ran for 5 mins before I stopped.Then it hit me!Why had the Brain not been giving me orders?I checked my uplink,but it was fine.I started to get worried so I sat down and tried really hard to contact our brain.Then I heard a voice in my head,But it was not the brains voice.It said ''Brain to Clone link dameged'' How?I said ''The is a an EMP brain blocker on planet.Its location is...'' Then the voice began to fade in and out.Well it looked like I was on my own.


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I added both chapters to the first post to organised things a bit more. Also, I have taken it apon myself to type all my posts in green. Why? I don't know. The story will remain white.


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Cool!I am going to make the storys into a mopd.Wanna help 3 Solid?(Porno film)


Sat May 05, 2007 10:29 am
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(ignoring that comment on my name)
I don't know how to mod, but I can sprite.


-3 Solid


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Updated.

- 3 Solid


Mon May 07, 2007 8:30 am
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Here is chapter 3.

Chapter 3

I kept walking until suddenely there was a huge crater in front of me.I looked in and saw a crashed rockit.I jumped into the crater and walked over to the rockit.I reached to open the door...
Red clone:Stop!
What?
Red clone:Its booby-trapped.I rigged a grenade to go off when someone opened the door.
Why did you do that?
Red clone:Why do think I do it?To kill Green's.
Oh...Yeah.Right.
Red clone:Is your link off as well?
Yep.Want to help me out of this hole?
Then he helped me out the crater.He told me that he never made it to the camp.I told him that he was luckey.Then he told me that he had seen a strange group of clones making their way to the green HQ.He told me that must be more Reds making their way to the HQ to kill Green's.I was not so sure but did not tell him that.And so we headed off to the Green HQ.And that was that.


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