Joined: Mon Oct 12, 2009 11:19 pm Posts: 797 Location: The Netherlands
Re: Art Dump
robolee wrote:
I think you need to be less sketchy and use more opaque lines, but it's not bad, keep going.
Thanks for the comments, I konw what you mean and agree. I think I'm still pretty bad at deliberate line placement and colour blending. When I try to work fast (those last two f.e.) it often becomes muddy like that. Usually I'd then go in and paint over/refine it, but that still takes me longer than I'd like.
Sweet landscape madmax, nice colour and lighting. I think the perspective is a bit off, with the river in the distance? It could be going downards though.
Thanks for the feedback guys, I decided to work on it a little more, tried to pop the mountain with some shadow, added some distant foggy hills, road and a few little things to help unlame-ify the foreground.
Adriaan, I was kinda unclear on your comment, I can't really see the perspective issue with the river.
The individual facial features generally aren't bad at all but they all suffer from bad placement, incorrect spacing, and generally bad proportions. I would study up on the general proportions of the head and the facial features(see below for a good reference). Don't even bother with shading until you're pretty confident with the proportions.
Also keep in mind how things like eyes and mouths wrap around the head when viewed from an angle, they' aren't flat If you want to know more Andrew Loomis is your man, look up one of his books for a simple easy way to construct the human head
Wed Jun 19, 2013 4:39 am
trystanr
Joined: Sat Oct 09, 2010 10:01 am Posts: 303 Location: Afrique d' Sud
Re: Art Dump
Hello! Been a while. Anyways. All school assignments. Spoilered for HUGE. Also, oldest first, most recent last (Which I finished yesterday).
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