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I think you need to be less sketchy and use more opaque lines, but it's not bad, keep going.

Thanks for the comments, I konw what you mean and agree. I think I'm still pretty bad at deliberate line placement and colour blending. When I try to work fast (those last two f.e.) it often becomes muddy like that. Usually I'd then go in and paint over/refine it, but that still takes me longer than I'd like.

Sweet landscape madmax, nice colour and lighting. I think the perspective is a bit off, with the river in the distance? It could be going downards though.


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That mountain also seems a little flat, great work though.


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Thanks for the feedback guys, I decided to work on it a little more, tried to pop the mountain with some shadow, added some distant foggy hills, road and a few little things to help unlame-ify the foreground.

Adriaan, I was kinda unclear on your comment, I can't really see the perspective issue with the river.


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Something I've always liked about your work Max, is the sharpness, even on smaller scales.


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Very glad to hear, Matty. Thanks.


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Awww goddamn MadMax, why'd you remove the other one. I'd have liked to see the differences.


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Oh, oops, I deleted it from my Imageshack account to save space. It wasn't a big edit though.


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Working on a Kerbal


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At least it ain't a stick figure.


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Royal Guard concept
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Same armor, just changed the halberd.
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Some other stuff
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My first attempts at drawing human faces. If anybody could give me some constructive criticism or tips, I'd really appreciate it.


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Wed Jun 19, 2013 1:18 am
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The individual facial features generally aren't bad at all but they all suffer from bad placement, incorrect spacing, and generally bad proportions. I would study up on the general proportions of the head and the facial features(see below for a good reference). Don't even bother with shading until you're pretty confident with the proportions.


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Hello! Been a while.
Anyways. All school assignments.
Spoilered for HUGE.
Also, oldest first, most recent last (Which I finished yesterday).


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Last three are great, first few are kinda weird and lack contrast.

Some facial expression practice, 2 ref'd, 2 from imagination
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Hehe, he does have a bit of a smug grin to him.


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