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				 Adriaan 
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					 Joined: Mon Oct 12, 2009 11:19 pm Posts: 797 Location: The Netherlands
				 
				 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						I'm no expert on pixel art, but to my eyes those look too noisy and repetitive. Due to my lack of experience with animation and drawing water I can't really say what I'd change exactly, but maybe try and create larger, wave-looking patterns of smooth highlights or something like that? Maybe lengthen or put a pause in the animation if possible to make it seem a bit calmer too, if that's possible. 
					
  
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				 Shook 
				
				
					 Joined: Fri Feb 16, 2007 8:43 pm Posts: 1695 Location: AH SHIT FUCK AUGH
				 
				 
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						WATER TIIIIIIIIIIIILES I think i mostly agree with Adriaan, the super shiny bits seem a bit TOO shiny, if that's even a thing. But, i still like it, it does look quite watery when one thinks about how a lake looks in sunlight with a mild breeze. c: @matty: Oh it's okay, nobody ever notices me anyways............. :< Haha, kidding, always happy to compliment on great art!   meanwhile here's something that spawned from another "i can't sleep right now" night  it's a plant i ♥♥♥♥ up the stem though  
					
  
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				 caekdaemon 
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					 Joined: Sun Nov 01, 2009 3:00 pm Posts: 4144 Location: Hell.
				 
				 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						I laughed at the nam part more than I should've. It gave me mental images of the plant being in the Vietnam war for some reason :p Also, I have to agree with the others, the water seems a little too shiny in my opinion. I'm no expert on spriting, but why not take a look at the way Transport Tycoon  did it? The game was isometric, yes, but I think the water looked pretty good.  
					
  
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				 Lizardheim 
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					 Joined: Fri May 15, 2009 10:29 am Posts: 4107 Location: Russia
				 
				 
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				 Benpasko 
				
				
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						I dig the energy dome.   
					
  
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				 Lizardheim 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						It's really a mushroom person, but without it it'd die so yeah, energy dome. 
					
  
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				 CaveCricket48 
				
				
					 Joined: Tue Jun 12, 2007 11:52 pm Posts: 13144 Location: Here
				 
				 
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						I have captured the essence of Kelas.   
					
  
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				 Izen 
				
				
					 Joined: Sat Oct 22, 2011 12:56 am Posts: 1474 Location: At the corner of unoriginality and boring
				 
				 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						I hope this is for a game of some sort, I'd love to see mushroom armies fighting with that level of animation  
					
  
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				 Lizardheim 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						That's the idea. Here's some anims with better flow, btw.    
					
  
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				 Shook 
				
				
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						Snazzy stuff brolizard, i must say i'm intrigued as to what exactly those sprites are being used in, even though you're probably just going to be all "lolsekrit". :U @Cave: That is super Kelas, if he is to be used as an adjective. I think. I mean ♥♥♥♥ i don't know Kelas like the back of my hand but i'm reasonably sure he's a cool guy and also it's a snazzy style you got there and commas COMMAS  COMMAS. That means i like it. c: Also, decided to smack some colours on the plant thing.  It may have cost me valuable sleep, but it was fun to do, so hey!  
					
  
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				 Miggles 
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					 Joined: Mon Jul 12, 2010 5:39 am Posts: 4558
				 
				 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						CaveCricket48 wrote: I have captured the essence of Kelas.  he looks like a  nice guy 
					
  
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				 Adriaan 
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					 Joined: Mon Oct 12, 2009 11:19 pm Posts: 797 Location: The Netherlands
				 
				 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						Lizardheim wrote: That's the idea. Here's some anims with better flow, btw.   Anims look sweet!  
					
  
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				 Mackerel 
				
				
					 Joined: Thu May 05, 2011 1:30 am Posts: 2876 Location: Rent free in your head. Vacation in your ass.
				 
				 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						 trying to use my tablet more often and finding my "style" criticism would be cool  
					
  
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				 Lizardheim 
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						Shook wrote: Snazzy stuff brolizard, i must say i'm intrigued as to what exactly those sprites are being used in, even though you're probably just going to be all "lolsekrit". :U Will try to finally make that "mushkin game" thing, floating islands and all.  
					
  
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				 Miggles 
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						Mackerel wrote: pictur trying to use my tablet more often and finding my "style" criticism would be cool the curvy lines are cool but i dont like the scribbles shading it looks like you drew the shape well but fudged it on the coloring in, and it doesnt look as good  basically less scribble  
					
  
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