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				 Emogotsaone 
				
				
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						That looks like you made the contrast a bit more noticeable, but I think he means separating the right arm (and other limbs I guess, but the right arm bothers me the most) from the torso. Maybe create a shadow on the sword so it doesn't look flat with the body? I... Don't really know though     
					
  
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				 Benpasko 
				
				
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						I would make the blade beefier, and make his far arm more heavily shadowed. With the way it is now his foreground arm looks almost like it's on the same plane as the bg one. 
					
  
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				 Urch 
				
				
					 Joined: Mon Sep 28, 2009 2:15 am Posts: 720 Location: A fucking desert.
				 
				 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						Game Make! (Yeah, Right...) 
					
  
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				 YHTFLKC 
				
				
					 Joined: Thu Dec 27, 2007 4:08 am Posts: 590 Location: USA
				 
				 
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				 Miggles 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						Urch wrote: Game Make! (Yeah, Right...)Is that Node?  
					
  
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				 Urch 
				
				
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						Yes Send Help 
					
  
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				 Miggles 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						urch sonic would have some very choice words to say to you right now 
					
  
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				 Urch 
				
				
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						What? 
					
  
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				 Miggles 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						youre too slow 
					
  
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				 Urch 
				
				
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						I don't see how that applies. 
					
  
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				 Mackerel 
				
				
					 Joined: Thu May 05, 2011 1:30 am Posts: 2876 Location: Rent free in your head. Vacation in your ass.
				 
				 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						Strange. I wait to see the finished.  
					
  
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				 Adriaan 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						More Kirinoface, from ref  
					
  
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				 Roast Veg 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
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				 matty406 
				
				
					 Joined: Tue Oct 13, 2009 4:23 pm Posts: 915 Location: Blighty
				 
				 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						Man I can't use tiny size brushes because my lines end up becoming sketchy and disconnected. Do you start huge then resize the image down or something? 
					
  
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				 Adriaan 
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				  Re: Art Dump  
					
						matty406 wrote: Man I can't use tiny size brushes because my lines end up becoming sketchy and disconnected. Do you start huge then resize the image down or something? Yeah, large canvas, although what I used here is probably still considered relatively small. The head took up about 1400 pixels squared at 100%, I used brushsize between 5 and 10 I think. It's not like I do all the lines perfectly the first time either ofc. Mostly I try and get it right in as few pieces as possible to keep as much of the line dynamic as possible, but even then I usually redo and erase a lot. What kind of brush settings do you use?  
					
  
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