Yeah, the Pistol looks more like a small SMG. Maybe scale the Autopistol up into an SMG, the Pistol up into an Autopistol, and make a new Pistol with the mag going through the grip?

How's that?

The pistol looks great, though I'd eliminate that part of the barrel that sticks out, to give it a more tidy look.

The shotgun magazine is either too big or it's offset is kinda low.

Looks good but instead of removing the barrel I would move it up one or two pixels.


Something of mine. I like it but it just feels like it is... off for some reason. Not sure what I should do with it, if anything.

The black part of the eye looks kinda wierd.

should I use a lighter black for the pupil? Or another color all together?

Giving it a second look, it doesn't look that bad.

I'm not sure what it is

But I can tell it's something in the eye.

He is giving you the stink eye lol

Your outlining and shading is too sharp, use similar colors that don't clash too hard and kind of flow into it more instead.

Heres an edit to show you what I mean.


Left side is yours, right is mine.

Everything else is great, nice job.

Did you edit it by hand or did you run it through a filter of some kind?

By hand.

Ah ok I wasn't sure cause some of it looked "abnormal" I'll try to touch them up a little and post results here for more criticism Thanks

I think I will stick with a darker, more defined, color for the pupils though. Eyes aren't really supposed to blend anyway.


What about these?

Those look good, but like I said keep the dark outline away from the lightly shaded areas and keep them around the dark shaded areas.

Should I just edit the outlines or do the sprites and shading themselves need any work?

Just the outlining should do.