The head of the ship looks overshaded and really shiny. Same for the black things on top - the circular ones.

Im not sure what you mean by overshaded but the black things on top are fans, I guess I just didn't make them look circular and fan-ee enough



Thank you for the feedback though.

I think he means it looks too smooth in comparison to the other parts of the sprite

Exactly.

I still don't understand.

The head of the ship is cylindrical in shape with a circular head, I don't know any other way of not making it look cylindrical without making it look like that.

I only have a small spectrum of white to use here.

I don't know if it's too many highlights on the upper piece or not enough on the bottom. You should try experimenting with both.

Some double barrel shotguns. Can't decide which one looks best

I prefere the top one, though I think it needs some outlining.

Where would outlining work? Or should I remove the outline form the stock? I feel like if i put an outline around the barrel it will make it too thick.

Well, I think a 3 pix thick barrel would properly work fine.

Tried playing around a bit, though I have no idea how the shotgun you are trying to sprite looks like, and I don't really know much about guns, so...


Edit: made a few more edits

That's a really nice gun you two made there.

Final version I think I am happy with it. I made a break open sprite too because I would like it to show the open sprite while reloading. Hope that is possible.

It should be, yeah. I'm pretty sure you can't force-change the gun's frame, but you could almost certainly do some trickery with non-disposable magazines that ejects a pair of shells (feel free to use the spinning, smoking shells I made for the 40K comp!) and makes it appear like the front end of the gun is tipped open when you're reloading it.

Talk to CaveCricket - he helped me use magazine-animation trickery with the 40K plasma weapons to make it look like the heatsinks animated smoothly when firing.

Shotgun ^


Revolver^


Pistol ^


LMG ^


Trench Knife ^


Assault Rifle with Scope and Grenade Launcher ^


Assault Rifle ^


Auto Pistol^

Resprited from adasx10's wonderful sprites, with permission.

Well. I think the sprites looks good especially the assault rifles, though if you want feedback here it comes.

1. I think the curved magazine on the shotgun looks a bit funky. try to work on it a bit more.

2. Dat revolver. I don't know if you where going for a hand cannon, but it sure reminds me of one

3. I think the pistol ooks to much like the auto pistol. I suggest having a grip magazine or what ever they are called, to set the silhouettes apart.

4. the magazine on the assault rifles looks a bit wonky as it kinda look more like a box magazine. I think you should move the mag 1 pixel down so it don't look like it overlap as much.

5. I think you should make some of buttom outlines a slight bit darker and give it slightly heavier shading. The revolver in particular needs this in my opinion.