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 THE STORY of Cortex Command 

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 THE STORY of Cortex Command 
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I hope I'm not doing anything wrong by posting this here, add stories, pictures and text that you think adds to the story of Cortex Command, could even be in game screen shots.

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Mon Jul 16, 2012 8:40 pm
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Well, despite the exaggerated year I think it's pretty good. You said "Some say" a few too many times, and there were quite a lot of unneeded commas but it was good.


Mon Jul 16, 2012 9:13 pm
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Didn't got the "3 cycles left" part.


Mon Jul 16, 2012 9:57 pm
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Thanks for the reads guys :)
Feel free to post anything of your own at any time. Would be great to get other posts.

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There are 12000000 stars I have on my map. Sol has been one many humans have tried to return to, the system of their X home planet. If only they knew, why all of that had happened. Guess we all need the war device to fall onto our rocks if we are to leave our homes for good. The war device, designed by the Preus i presume, unlike any technology any living civilization has developed remains impossible to reverse engineer. It drives any civilization to the brink of extinction when they are tricked to fight for it, they fight for their own destruction. Why? I guess the Preus wanted civilizations in the way of their enemy, but wanted our home worlds wiped out so that no civilization could ever become strong enough to pose a threat. For you see each of us think more lies out there in space, but the truth is , its our home worlds that held the most important elements specific for its races needs, especially here in space. If we had only known.

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I remember d day. The fierce struggle, the blood on my face, wish it had been mine, wish it had been my blood! The last war they said, the war that would end all wars on earth, it would be all worth it. They said its the war that would end all wars, sadly it did. It ended all.

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I feel none, I am dead man, crushing skulls of innocent man , taking life that I have none, what am I killing, who am I destroying,

Tha comma splice! Lol.


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Tue Jul 17, 2012 12:08 am
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Jason, do you want us to make stories? If yes, then I come to you with a very big present inside a little package called spoiler.



Now someone could talk about the space ship the brain is being attacked. Oh, and for those who don't care about spoilers, click over there:


Tue Jul 17, 2012 5:20 am
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Haha wow how did you know its Jason. Anyway awesome!
"Now someone could talk about the space ship the brain is being attacked." I'm not exactly sure what you are referring to, could you clarify?


Tue Jul 17, 2012 7:30 pm
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Your great mod, that Jason clone. :D
Don't you want us to make a story for Cortex Command, explaining all factions and stuff like that? If yes, then I was just wanting for someone to make a continuation for the story.


Tue Jul 17, 2012 8:47 pm
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That would be awesome. Will edit this soon.

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Any demands, questioning, interrogation or anything for that matter is welcome, no matter what you think you can or cannot do, all I do is start typing, on my blackberry, XD .


Tue Jul 17, 2012 9:52 pm
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NOTIFIER: I will add pics to each of the stories to bring them alive for you guys. Also once again feedback will be enjoyed for both Joseph and myself and anyone else who wants to write something, I will add pics to everyone's stories. As soon as I have access to a pc again lol.

Listening to epic music is advised,the words in quotations are that of Carthiuas.

I cannot stretch the importance of music enough, first part, epic score: supermassive destruction second tiny part world of warcraft invincible fall of the Litch king.





I'm doing other factions, I'm holding out for in case someone wants to do any of the known factions. Before...


Thu Jul 19, 2012 9:30 pm
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Here is the 3rd or 4th part of the story (can't look now because I am lazy :P )

Are people reading this? Without replies I feel like I am doing nothing here :oops: . Anyway, at least I can make someone happy by writing those stories. That's great for me.


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For this one more important than the rest:right this second by Deadmau5. Don't read this without headphones and that song.


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WARNING--BIG TEXT AHEAD--WARNING

I'm going to travel tomorrow, so no more stories for some time... Sorry, guys :T


Fri Jul 20, 2012 5:12 pm
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Wow really epic
That's really good so I'm going to leave the ronin, or at least that story entirely to Joseph and will start doing a series on the dummies.
I'm going to stop with the pics for now, I want to do them properly and not so sluggish.
Believe me when I say, the stories have just begun.


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Cybernetic wrote:
Wow really epic
That's really good so I'm going to leave the ronin, or at least that story entirely to Joseph and will start doing a series on the dummies.
I'm going to stop with the pics for now, I want to do them properly and not so sluggish.
Believe me when I say, the stories have just begun.



If I feel up to it at some point I may offer to do some pictures for this, really depends though, I don't always feel like drawing. let me know if that sounds like a good idea or not.


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That would be great thanks. Will help a lot, anyone can add anything at anytime without asking. Its up to you guys. Btw I just wrote the ending of the dummies series, haha. (Although it happened first, but it sort of reveals everything so ill add it at the end of the series, oh well time to write the first story then...



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