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Re: Link Dump
0:23 Spider jumping to the music.
I like the style of it, but I didn't like the extended periods of watching you do something, eg crafting. (Though you did cut to each tool being finished then, which was great.) There could have been a little more expansion on each thing as well, for example, you didn't show slimes, cows, pigs, the Nether, and so on. Also the camera bob kinda ruined it for me. There's an option to turn it off in the settings if you didn't know.
Briefly; needs faster cuts, more info, no camera bob. The style of shooting I like, as well as the music. EDIT: Also I didn't like your font choice. Try a sans-serif font.
Mon Dec 12, 2011 2:25 am
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Re: Link Dump
Wed Dec 14, 2011 4:26 am
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