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CrazyMLC
Joined: Fri Dec 22, 2006 4:20 am Posts: 4772 Location: Good news everyone!
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 Re: Art Dump
Eya Coops!
I'll be honest with ya, the design is confusing, and the shading is pretty iffy. Still, not too shabby. Keep at it bro.
Ben, I like the first sketch. Very clean and crisp lines. The design is sort of stereotypical, however. Still looks nice though, and nothing looks particularly off or wrong. Nice job!
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Coops
Joined: Wed Feb 17, 2010 12:07 am Posts: 1545 Location: That small peaceful place called Hell.
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I'm not seeing this! Where am I pillow shading?
Also hey Crazy, good to see ya again.
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Wed Mar 09, 2011 4:01 pm |
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Gregstein
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Here's my humble contribution for community  link for resolution 1024x768 is here: http://i.imgur.com/v1oFD.jpg
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Wed Mar 09, 2011 7:11 pm |
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Metal Chao
Joined: Sat May 05, 2007 6:04 pm Posts: 2901
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Coops9753 wrote: I'm not seeing this! Where am I pillow shading?
Also hey Crazy, good to see ya again. Everywhere. Literally every part that is shaded is pillow shaded. This is because you have shaded it with the light source directly in front of the man rather than someone else (IE, top right). Try making the light patches top right and the dark bottom left instead of putting the light in the middle and the dark on the outside.
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Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:54 pm |
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Coops
Joined: Wed Feb 17, 2010 12:07 am Posts: 1545 Location: That small peaceful place called Hell.
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Ahh ok that makes more sense to me. EDIT: this should look better then.  Also very cool, Gregstein.
Last edited by Coops on Thu Mar 10, 2011 12:24 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Wed Mar 09, 2011 11:50 pm |
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madmax
Joined: Sun Apr 22, 2007 8:01 pm Posts: 378 Location: Nomadic
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Balls  Randomly shifting hues like a boss
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Thu Mar 10, 2011 1:47 am |
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Urch
Joined: Mon Sep 28, 2009 2:15 am Posts: 720 Location: A fucking desert.
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yellow one doesn't look so good; red one and the one in the blue box are pretty nice.
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Thu Mar 10, 2011 2:31 am |
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Geti
Joined: Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:57 am Posts: 4886 Location: some compy
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Nonsequitorian wrote: I frankly don't see it. Well, I do.  I made an edit that I think describes the intended form a lot better, but do take note that I don't know what the intended form is, I've had to interpret from your words and the pixels. It seemed you were using a lot of non-pixel art techniques as well, soft brushes and the like, because there were a lot of colours that were completely unnecessary. Here's what I saw in your piece, for clarification: 
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Thu Mar 10, 2011 7:21 am |
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caekdaemon
Data Realms Elite
Joined: Sun Nov 01, 2009 3:00 pm Posts: 4144 Location: Hell.
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Gregstein wrote: Here's my humble contribution for community That made me cry manly tears.
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Thu Mar 10, 2011 6:19 pm |
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madmax
Joined: Sun Apr 22, 2007 8:01 pm Posts: 378 Location: Nomadic
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Extra balls + a few edits to Gold and Marble  Gold looks more like a Christmas ornament I just realized.
Last edited by madmax on Fri Mar 11, 2011 4:02 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Thu Mar 10, 2011 6:58 pm |
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Lizardheim
DRL Developer
Joined: Fri May 15, 2009 10:29 am Posts: 4107 Location: Russia
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Did you just confuse Geti with CaveCricket? wow.
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Thu Mar 10, 2011 11:11 pm |
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Toes from Europe
Joined: Wed Feb 14, 2007 9:34 pm Posts: 883 Location: America
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learn anatomy don't jpeg make a composition that doesn't look like ♥♥♥♥
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Fri Mar 11, 2011 1:28 am |
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Dr. Evil
Joined: Mon Aug 17, 2009 3:00 am Posts: 242 Location: The Great White North
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Toes from Europe wrote: learn anatomy don't jpeg make a composition that doesn't look like ♥♥♥♥ Aw, I thought is was ok. Not face meltingly awesome or anything, but better than a lot of other stuff that gets posted. madmax wrote: Extra balls + a few edits to Gold and Marble  Gold looks more like a Christmas ornament I just realized. I love the lead one. Reflection on gold is a bit weird, IMHO, but I recognize the difficulty there.
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Fri Mar 11, 2011 3:28 am |
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Grif
REAL AMERICAN HERO
Joined: Sat Jan 27, 2007 10:25 pm Posts: 5655
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just a reminder folks, try to keep criticism civil
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Fri Mar 11, 2011 4:02 am |
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Culthero
Joined: Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:07 pm Posts: 126 Location: Turkey
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That's just great. It tells a lot in those 786432 pixels. It's like Cortana and the Master Chief, or Rogue Trooper and his biochip buddies. Would make a great splash screen for "survive for x minutes/waves" type of CC missions.
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