Your lineart is too thick

Noted. It's also fairly choppy there :/

Re-paged as I'd like more feedback.

Looking at the woman again, her backside is very odd O_o

Looks like her spine furrow goes right up into her shoulder, feet look weird too. Hard to CC it because it's so stylized. You should try to drop the style and color when you do practices like that and just go for speed so you can get more in. The colors are kind of random, they don't really work to show form and muscles. Anyway, good work as usual, overall proportions are good as far as I can see.

They're just me cleaning up the lines and construction that I get from Posemaniacs practice, not the only ones I did The feet are a little off, good to notice.

I might post some sketch sheets up soon, but I'm packing and seeing friends at the moment.

in the pre-production stage of making an iphone game with a bunch of friends from uni.
its going to be a topdown thumbstick shooter, using the unreal engine.

Your anatomy is slightly off, and his foot is screwed

yes, im terrible at posing characters. its like being stabbed in the face. and it ♥♥♥♥ up everything else like perspective on the ribcage and pectorals.

Lonesome Kobold playing on a guitar.

offtopic:

to be fairly honest, I've heard it spoken several ways including those above. I don't understand your confusion.

http://shotofanthrax.deviantart.com/

My old deviantart account. I might start submitting stuff again (I kind of initially stopped after like two weeks of the creation of my account) and have already put up some new stuff this week, so yeah. Right now it's just full of terrain generation renders, but eventually I'll have more than that in there- maybe some drawings for various games, pixel art, etc when I get around to it.

Man, that pic just makes me wanna say
"Boatmurdered soon, Kobold!"
"Really? When?"
"NOW"

I'm thinking of using these old pw sprites of mine for some other stuff (maybe even finish the massive ship)


do you think these would side scroll well in a shooter or would it be boring to fight these?

also: 15 minute avatar

WIP

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Nice tiara.