It must take a lot of work, I liked your other CYOA better really.
It's better when you have an idea of the story line and it's easier to do that when you've made it all yourself, because you aren't constrained by someone else's rules.
This one seemed to me to be less interesting to read because 1) I'd already read Homestuck and 2) If you have any ideas for an over-arching plot they haven't yet become obvious :P

Don't feel compelled to stop though, this is just the opinion of one man.

Yeah, but since you have read homestuck, you also know that after John Enters the medium, things start to get much more interesting. These 6 heroes are already in the medium, but this first use of the jump point is that "jump" into the medium.

Plot points and overarching things soon to follow.

PS: My CYOA was based on a universe created by a friend of mine, so im still constricted within the limits of another persons world.

SHUT UP THIS IS COOL AND FUN.

Ok guys, im kinda sorry i havent been updating this today. I have had a very... Slow weekend, cause i wanted to just kinda relax.

I am making daily pictures thought! Things called NOPADs. It stands for "November Original Picture A Day!"

These are the first three:







They are all part of the giant ORIGINAL world i have in my head! You can go to my DeviantArt (Located here) to see the rest of them! Im up to 7 as of this writing! There are even small blurbs in the descriptions, talking about what the picture is of and a few details on the pictures thing!

Anyways, yeah. Sorry to bother.

I just realized you guys could have made a flamethrower with a:
Gas tank,Acetylene torch,a huge bronze pipe,a gas valve,welders,soldering irons and some tapes

Or perhaps shorten it down to "Fthrower" Or something?

How about "Bazoooka"?

Codes don't work like that.

Well, I only had this to guide me from, since that MSPA on that site seemed...Terrible.

Get out.

User warned for this post. - Seraph

Get out.

User warned for this post. - Seraph

Get. Out.

User warned for this post. - Seraph

dexexe1234 you must do cutscenes as awesome as Homestuck there will be no excuse if you do not.
Just read up to the end of Chapter 2...

What? I only read it for 7 to 8 pages and lost complete interest. That tends to happen Alot, unless I actual know if something going to be good. That and I hurt my chin by having it rest on my arm during the entire process.

And I wont get out. Im not sure how you leave something that's not a room, nor has a door.

Believe us. There will be something good.
The whole thing.

Damn life has been in the way of this.

Its not dead, im just coping with life right now.

So yeah.