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You need pictures.

A few things, 1. NEVER put anythings heath over 100,it messes with the costs. 2. the guns sprites could use some work. 3. decrease the recoil, a lot.

Both weapons have too much sharpness, they penetrate terrain too much and that looks bad. But other than that, I like the function of the rifle.

Making a fictional weapon and calling it the name of an existent weapon looks bad, in my opinion. It would make more sense to either make a somewhat realistic representation of a Five seVen, or call your fictional high-recoil 18-round blaster thingy something else.

The descriptions are full of rectangles, that is, invalid characters. (for an English CC installation) I'm guessing it's written in your primary language? I suggest you change that, since this is an English forum, and only English writing can be moderated by the moderators, because English is [probably] the only shared language among all of the moderators. As shown in an event involving a baby in a particular mod, the content of mods posted on the forums is subject to forum moderation.

The actor should have 100 health, and other things should be done to make it more resilient to damage, for reasons that have been thoroughly discussed.

All in all, it's good for a first, but it has room for improvement, which I suggest you make a higher priority than expansion.

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Nothing much i can add on top of all the other comments.

The dropship looks familiar, is it a recolour by any chance?

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It's a resprite of the Coalition Dropship in the Sprite Dump.

And it looks familiar because the same person who dumped it also used it in their Brutal mod. Which basically everybody tried.

Heheh, I feel included for once!

But anyways, the mod is also quite small, and just gives us the same stuff that we have been getting lately from new members... that makes me sound like a hypocrite, but whatever. I have been following these forums for awhile now, and I just see another unfinished mod with terrain rape+overpoweredness.

I know that looks a bit harsh after reading it, but truly it isn't at all, it's just some constructive criticism... good luck and I hope you continue this mod!

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I'd reccomend starting smaller and making everything yourself instead of biting off more than you can chew.
Look at vanilla sprites on how the colors are oriented and such and try to replicate that and eventually you're going to be good at it.
Also, with starting smaller, I mean do stuff like one actor instead of two, but having a higher quality on that one actor.

Quality > Quantity any day.

I'll modernise my actor and guns today

V 0.2

Dogkiller, why you brought your mod from parts of other mods Russian authors? Of these, approximately 75% - my old mod, which I did mostly for yourself.
Proof - my mod (well, I stole a lot works, but I did for myself)
Link - http://www.mediafire.com/?asrbrn1w0100my4
Compare the "inside" the folder with the mod author. He left the folder "images", which is similar to mine.
Screenshots (2008):


I ask to punish him for copyright infringement and close this topic.