That poem is awfully generic.
Seems pretty forced overall, and what is with the random ye olde English?

Yea, it was kinda forced, ye olde English was just filler. I only really did it because I'm bored.

Looks great.

I think it's fairly good so far but it's missing focus. For example in coffee's you eye is drawn to the mens and the pack animal, not only by the fact that they are very detailed, but also because the structure of the piece frames them very well. Whereas with your I don't know whether to look at the guy, or the tower, or the moon, or what. Also, having the sky up there kind of destroys the enclosedness which was big part of the magic of coffee's piece.

Heh, wow. Someone from Pixelation actually came and posted on DRL!

I really like it, but it lacks focus.

Actually MLC, photocopier came to pw a while ago, then I showed him DRL yesterday :3

Mkay...



Made some progress.

MLC: Why so serious?

There is no image rule on this thread right?

Whatever.



What could this villain be up to, anyways.

Progress is best posted .png.

... damn photobucket.
I'll work on it a bit more and post a png.



I can't quite put my finger on it, but something about her face, hands, and back foot really annoy me. :/

@MLC her arms are too thin. compare it to her legs and they look like celery sticks... unless that was intentional.

Hm... That was an attempt and making her more feminine. Perhaps I'll make them thicker though... I don't like the arms in general.

Her arms look really short. Proportionally, they're about right, but I think somehow they look wrong in comparison to the skirt.

I love the mecha-boots she's wearing, all metal clad and jointy...