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Why must my Haikus
be in italics? Because
matty started it.

Screw you contrary.
I like my Haikus, and so
will make another.


Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:36 pm
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I think i am sad
Of these horrible Haikus
So stop making them


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Not a haiku, the first line has 6 syllables.


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Duh102 wrote:
Not a haiku, the first line has 6 syllables.

Godamnit. Excuse my horrible syllables.


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Don't worry, it marked the end of the haikus anyway.


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It's so late

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Uh antialiased lines, blur and a sorta eye? ART, MATE


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The main purpose of Haikus is to describe nature's beauty.

Small children running
In summer's vast fields of gold
Dancing in the sun


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That last line has 6 syllables.

The way of haikus
is five to seven to five,
no deviations


Sun Sep 26, 2010 12:12 am
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Write Haikus backwards
Now then, break the mold,
Post Haikus in bold


Edit:
I call it meta-poetry.

Edit:
Read Haikus backwards
Slightly different meaning
Insignificant


Not really happy with the second one. :\


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First "pixel drawing" I've done in months
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That's very good, madmax!


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Gibbed is one syllable. The format is 5, 7, 5. You could probably do a different format though - there are lots of them in the same style but longer at the very least if not more flexible.


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You could always explore beyond the limits of Haikus.

There is a very skilled pianist from the lands of Paris
Whom musicians across the globe respect and cherish
    She would travel the world forever
    And play for those whom adore her
Unfortunately for them this poor pianist is fingerless




EDIT: Roast, that poem seems okay, but you could always be a bit more poetic...
"it gibbed and killed me." is a little anti-climactic, you know?

I'd also recommend avoiding commas, as they seem to break the flow of the poem. Having each line be incomplete might not help with the flow much though.


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WIP of a collab lizzard and I are working on.
Kinda inspired by coffee over at pixelation
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