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Roast Veg
Data Realms Elite
Joined: Tue May 25, 2010 8:27 pm Posts: 4521 Location: Constant motion
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Re: Art Dump
My game it seems has failed to work orderly. Computer is blue.
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Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:20 pm |
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YHTFLKC
Joined: Thu Dec 27, 2007 4:08 am Posts: 590 Location: USA
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Re: Art Dump
Good one. Pretty funny, man.
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Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:20 pm |
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Roast Veg
Data Realms Elite
Joined: Tue May 25, 2010 8:27 pm Posts: 4521 Location: Constant motion
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Re: Art Dump
Thanks. They're real easy to invent, if you've got a good vocabulary and a sense of rhythm.
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Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:27 pm |
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Contrary
Joined: Mon Mar 16, 2009 10:50 pm Posts: 2175 Location: Neverwhere
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Re: Art Dump
No but those are not good haikus at all. They're really easy for you to write because they are bad. They are very simple 4th grade sentences that happen to 17 syllables. It's like if I said this attached face were good pixel art. It's a horrible bastardization of the original concept which, if called acceptable, invalidates the hard work and talent all good practitioners of the art.
Attachments:
face.JPG [754 Bytes]
Not downloaded yet
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Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:33 pm |
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Natti
Data Realms Elite
Joined: Fri Jul 03, 2009 11:05 am Posts: 3878
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Re: Art Dump
Hahaha, that's a good one. EDIT: What the frak, he must have deleted it!EDIT: Everyone was faster than me. I was trying to comment on the matty's AI-haiku.
Last edited by Natti on Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:54 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:36 pm |
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Roast Veg
Data Realms Elite
Joined: Tue May 25, 2010 8:27 pm Posts: 4521 Location: Constant motion
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Re: Art Dump
Why must my Haikus be in italics? Because matty started it.
Screw you contrary. I like my Haikus, and so will make another.
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Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:36 pm |
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dragonxp
Joined: Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:16 am Posts: 3032 Location: Somewhere in the universe
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Re: Art Dump
I think i am sad Of these horrible Haikus So stop making them
Last edited by dragonxp on Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:58 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:47 pm |
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Duh102
happy carebear mom
Joined: Tue Mar 04, 2008 1:40 am Posts: 7096 Location: b8bbd5
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Re: Art Dump
Not a haiku, the first line has 6 syllables.
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Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:55 pm |
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dragonxp
Joined: Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:16 am Posts: 3032 Location: Somewhere in the universe
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Re: Art Dump
Duh102 wrote: Not a haiku, the first line has 6 syllables. Godamnit. Excuse my horrible syllables.
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Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:58 pm |
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Roast Veg
Data Realms Elite
Joined: Tue May 25, 2010 8:27 pm Posts: 4521 Location: Constant motion
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Re: Art Dump
Don't worry, it marked the end of the haikus anyway.
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Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:59 pm |
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findude
Joined: Tue Dec 12, 2006 3:10 pm Posts: 495 Location: Uncertain quantum state
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Re: Art Dump
It's so late Uh antialiased lines, blur and a sorta eye? ART, MATE
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Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:20 pm |
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CrazyMLC
Joined: Fri Dec 22, 2006 4:20 am Posts: 4772 Location: Good news everyone!
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Re: Art Dump
The main purpose of Haikus is to describe nature's beauty.
Small children running In summer's vast fields of gold Dancing in the sun
Last edited by CrazyMLC on Sun Sep 26, 2010 12:21 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Sun Sep 26, 2010 12:09 am |
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CaveCricket48
Joined: Tue Jun 12, 2007 11:52 pm Posts: 13144 Location: Here
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Re: Art Dump
That last line has 6 syllables.
The way of haikus is five to seven to five, no deviations
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Sun Sep 26, 2010 12:12 am |
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Petethegoat
Joined: Mon Jun 15, 2009 4:02 pm Posts: 905
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Re: Art Dump
Write Haikus backwards Now then, break the mold, Post Haikus in bold
Edit: I call it meta-poetry.
Edit: Read Haikus backwards Slightly different meaning Insignificant
Not really happy with the second one. :\
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Sun Sep 26, 2010 12:30 am |
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madmax
Joined: Sun Apr 22, 2007 8:01 pm Posts: 378 Location: Nomadic
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Re: Art Dump
First "pixel drawing" I've done in months
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Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:11 am |
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