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Roast Veg
Data Realms Elite
Joined: Tue May 25, 2010 8:27 pm Posts: 4521 Location: Constant motion
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 Re: Art Dump
1 just means so much more, I mean, it's an oxymoron, you wouldn't intentionally design one bar of signal would you? It's poetic and I like it best.
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Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:11 pm |
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Areku
Joined: Fri Oct 17, 2008 9:46 pm Posts: 5212 Location: The Grills Locker.
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Yep, 1 sounds much more professional.
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Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:49 pm |
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CrazyMLC
Joined: Fri Dec 22, 2006 4:20 am Posts: 4772 Location: Good news everyone!
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He should go somewhere inbetween. Like this:
1Bar Design
Sort of like
Bethesda Softworks
or
Blizzard Entertainment
We'll lovingly call it 1Bar, but its full name is 1Bar Design, sort of like a last name.
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Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:15 pm |
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Geti
Joined: Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:57 am Posts: 4886 Location: some compy
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he's 1up'd, perhaps.
Also mmn, that could be a good idea. I'll play around with the typography. I suppose I'll go with design for now, and do a review when it comes to doing the paperwork..
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Thu Sep 23, 2010 4:54 am |
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Lizardheim
DRL Developer
Joined: Fri May 15, 2009 10:29 am Posts: 4107 Location: Russia
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No. 1BarGames is what he originally had.
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Thu Sep 23, 2010 12:25 pm |
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Geti
Joined: Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:57 am Posts: 4886 Location: some compy
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I might go with the 1Bar thing when I review it, I kinda like it. However, it's just gone 12 and I'm about to go to bed. Any comments on the new site? Names that haven't been changed, typos, idiocies? Everything is heavily WIP, I've still got to add ilopocalypse to the games page, and I've still got to do all the php for the site, code a blog and maybe a forum (no sql available for the moment) but for a night's work I'm not too fussed.
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Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:11 pm |
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Dr. Evil
Joined: Mon Aug 17, 2009 3:00 am Posts: 242 Location: The Great White North
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Geti wrote: (no sql available for the moment) No mySQL? Seriously? What kind of webhost are you on? [criticism] All Caps Header links with the rollover underline (HOME, GAMES) are very 2001. Also, more space 'tween them. The logo could be a tad bigger, I think. Copyright could be smaller, and in a lighter color. The clicked-through color on the sidebar links is a tad pale, but not too bad. Again, I think that underline rollover links taste like 2001. on "Cool people", "people" should be capitalized. Your logo has much more empty space below it than above it. It would be cool if you could get the underscore to blink, à la Unix. [/criticism] I feel like a bit of really pale color somewhere could really make the page pop, but I don't know where.
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Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:49 pm |
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Geti
Joined: Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:57 am Posts: 4886 Location: some compy
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Oh god why am I still up?
I'm on the free kind of webhost. I'll pay for a database as soon as I've got anything that really needs it, but it could be fun to code a flatfile forum/blog anyway.
Thanks heaps for the criticism, very helpful. This is my first web design project in ♥♥♥♥ ages, so that's likely where I've picked up some of these 2001 habits you speak of. I'll go fix the random assorted messups (lack of title-casing on Cool People, idiot lack of space on the menubar etc) and I'll think about taking away the rollover underscores too, though I kind of like them. I'll definitely fade back the copyright line soon, but it's there as a reminder to me that everything is WIP.
I also like the idea of a blinking underscore, I've got a few gifs of the old logo with it, and it would probably bring it to life quite a lot more.
I'm still pondering over detailing colours. I've dropped the colours I was going to go with almost completely, so I might bring back pastel shades of them (gameboy green and a lurid purpley shade for contrast) and see how it looks.
That'll happen after tomorrow does though, jesus I need sleep. Thanks for going in-depth though.
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Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:04 pm |
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Dr. Evil
Joined: Mon Aug 17, 2009 3:00 am Posts: 242 Location: The Great White North
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Geti wrote: Thanks for going in-depth though. np. I hope I didn't seem like too much of a ♥♥♥♥♥. 
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Thu Sep 23, 2010 9:42 pm |
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matty406
Joined: Tue Oct 13, 2009 4:23 pm Posts: 915 Location: Blighty
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Animu i drew ages ago. I don't know why i'm posting.  derp.
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Thu Sep 23, 2010 10:14 pm |
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Geti
Joined: Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:57 am Posts: 4886 Location: some compy
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Dr. Evil wrote: Geti wrote: Thanks for going in-depth though. np. I hope I didn't seem like too much of a ♥♥♥♥♥.  Not at all. Hopefully it's a little better now, the menubar up the top is in no way near finished though, just a placeholder. Sakiskid wrote: Sort of like HI. Maybe latest blog post links. Make it look more fancy! What is HI? Blog is coming soon, I haven't coded it yet! Logo too big on home?
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Fri Sep 24, 2010 10:40 am |
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Sims_Doc
Joined: Fri Aug 20, 2010 4:45 am Posts: 911 Location: No Comment.
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Theses are a few more things ive drawn up in my spare time. 1.Dropship with Bomber Module fitted 2.Bits and Pieces 3.Moble Driller 4.Robtic arms
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Fri Sep 24, 2010 3:38 pm |
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spearmint
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o man... since TheLastBanana (i think) said poems are ok here is a haiku i made ages ago: I sit at my desk Looking at the leaves falling Where has Summer gone? terrible i know, but im working on that now 
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Fri Sep 24, 2010 8:08 pm |
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Natti
Data Realms Elite
Joined: Fri Jul 03, 2009 11:05 am Posts: 3878
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Pretty good imo.
Prolly because I suck at those.
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Fri Sep 24, 2010 10:25 pm |
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Contrary
Joined: Mon Mar 16, 2009 10:50 pm Posts: 2175 Location: Neverwhere
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I think most people miss the point of haikus. It's a not like a segment of a longer poem; a short, shallow message like you have done. I'd compare haikus heavily to pixel art. You have the same amount of content, full of the nuances of a longer poem, just in a more concise manner.
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Fri Sep 24, 2010 10:30 pm |
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