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1 just means so much more, I mean, it's an oxymoron, you wouldn't intentionally design one bar of signal would you? It's poetic and I like it best.


Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:11 pm
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Yep, 1 sounds much more professional.


Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:49 pm
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He should go somewhere inbetween.
Like this:

1Bar
Design

Sort of like

Bethesda
Softworks

or

Blizzard
Entertainment



We'll lovingly call it 1Bar, but its full name is 1Bar Design, sort of like a last name.


Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:15 pm
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he's 1up'd, perhaps.

Also mmn, that could be a good idea. I'll play around with the typography. I suppose I'll go with design for now, and do a review when it comes to doing the paperwork..


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No. 1BarGames is what he originally had.


Thu Sep 23, 2010 12:25 pm
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I might go with the 1Bar thing when I review it, I kinda like it.
However, it's just gone 12 and I'm about to go to bed.

Any comments on the new site? Names that haven't been changed, typos, idiocies?
Everything is heavily WIP, I've still got to add ilopocalypse to the games page, and I've still got to do all the php for the site, code a blog and maybe a forum (no sql available for the moment) but for a night's work I'm not too fussed.


Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:11 pm
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Geti wrote:
(no sql available for the moment)

No mySQL? Seriously? What kind of webhost are you on?

[criticism]
All Caps Header links with the rollover underline (HOME, GAMES) are very 2001.
Also, more space 'tween them.
The logo could be a tad bigger, I think.
Copyright could be smaller, and in a lighter color.
The clicked-through color on the sidebar links is a tad pale, but not too bad.
Again, I think that underline rollover links taste like 2001.
on "Cool people", "people" should be capitalized.
Your logo has much more empty space below it than above it.
It would be cool if you could get the underscore to blink, à la Unix.
[/criticism]
I feel like a bit of really pale color somewhere could really make the page pop, but I don't know where.


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Oh god why am I still up?

I'm on the free kind of webhost. I'll pay for a database as soon as I've got anything that really needs it, but it could be fun to code a flatfile forum/blog anyway.

Thanks heaps for the criticism, very helpful. This is my first web design project in ♥♥♥♥ ages, so that's likely where I've picked up some of these 2001 habits you speak of.
I'll go fix the random assorted messups (lack of title-casing on Cool People, idiot lack of space on the menubar etc) and I'll think about taking away the rollover underscores too, though I kind of like them.
I'll definitely fade back the copyright line soon, but it's there as a reminder to me that everything is WIP.

I also like the idea of a blinking underscore, I've got a few gifs of the old logo with it, and it would probably bring it to life quite a lot more.

I'm still pondering over detailing colours. I've dropped the colours I was going to go with almost completely, so I might bring back pastel shades of them (gameboy green and a lurid purpley shade for contrast) and see how it looks.

That'll happen after tomorrow does though, jesus I need sleep. Thanks for going in-depth though.


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Geti wrote:
Thanks for going in-depth though.

np. I hope I didn't seem like too much of a ♥♥♥♥♥. :P


Thu Sep 23, 2010 9:42 pm
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Animu i drew ages ago. I don't know why i'm posting.
Image
derp.


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Dr. Evil wrote:
Geti wrote:
Thanks for going in-depth though.

np. I hope I didn't seem like too much of a ♥♥♥♥♥. :P
Not at all. Hopefully it's a little better now, the menubar up the top is in no way near finished though, just a placeholder.
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Sort of like HI.
Maybe latest blog post links. Make it look more fancy!
What is HI? Blog is coming soon, I haven't coded it yet!

Logo too big on home?


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Theses are a few more things ive drawn up in my spare time.
1.Dropship with Bomber Module fitted
2.Bits and Pieces
3.Moble Driller
4.Robtic arms


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Fri Sep 24, 2010 3:38 pm
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o man...
since TheLastBanana (i think) said poems are ok here is a haiku i made ages ago:

I sit at my desk
Looking at the leaves falling
Where has Summer gone?

terrible i know, but im working on that now :wink:


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Pretty good imo.

Prolly because I suck at those.


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I think most people miss the point of haikus. It's a not like a segment of a longer poem; a short, shallow message like you have done. I'd compare haikus heavily to pixel art. You have the same amount of content, full of the nuances of a longer poem, just in a more concise manner.


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