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CrazyMLC
Joined: Fri Dec 22, 2006 4:20 am Posts: 4772 Location: Good news everyone!
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Re: Art Dump
lum = Luminocity Luminocity = Brightness I use MSPaint. It's measured in 0-255 Also remember to not go overboard on the detail, at a certain point things just look like a blob of pixels. Also outlines aren't required, it's merely a stylistic element. However it's useful to use in games to make things stand out, like the player character. The critique isn't meant to be harsh, I just wanted to point out all of the problems. Yoman: for your logos I'd recommend straying away from gradients. Classic logos/symbols don't use gradients, but remain classic symbols. Think like the US flag. The Ronin symbol shouldn't have the name, it should just be that faction's symbol IMO. The Techion logo might look better if the T was pure white, and the dot was more blue, to make it stand out. As it is the dot doesn't seem very important because it isn't the only blue part of the image- when it should be very important because it's what identifies it as the Whitebot faction.
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Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:13 am |
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dragonxp
Joined: Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:16 am Posts: 3032 Location: Somewhere in the universe
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Re: Art Dump
Flashier Coat of arms eh? Will work on that.
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Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:29 am |
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matty406
Joined: Tue Oct 13, 2009 4:23 pm Posts: 915 Location: Blighty
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Re: Art Dump
Tweaked it a bit.
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Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:29 pm |
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robolee
Joined: Fri May 11, 2007 4:30 pm Posts: 1040 Location: England
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Re: Art Dump
I've never liked the M
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Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:49 pm |
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Lizardheim
DRL Developer
Joined: Fri May 15, 2009 10:29 am Posts: 4107 Location: Russia
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Re: Art Dump
Maybe just one arrow in the middle of the M?
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Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:01 pm |
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m4n1ac
Joined: Wed Aug 27, 2008 3:12 pm Posts: 21
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Re: Art Dump
Matty, you need to change the font, and make that shield part be more noticable, and more shieldy.
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Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:48 pm |
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dragonxp
Joined: Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:16 am Posts: 3032 Location: Somewhere in the universe
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Re: Art Dump
I tried, again.
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Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:07 pm |
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Lizardheim
DRL Developer
Joined: Fri May 15, 2009 10:29 am Posts: 4107 Location: Russia
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Re: Art Dump
Try to keep it simple, no transparencies, no fancy gradients. Just solid colors.
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Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:25 pm |
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dragonxp
Joined: Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:16 am Posts: 3032 Location: Somewhere in the universe
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Re: Art Dump
Version 2: Simplicity at it's finest [no not really]
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Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:30 pm |
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Lizardheim
DRL Developer
Joined: Fri May 15, 2009 10:29 am Posts: 4107 Location: Russia
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Re: Art Dump
Try without the shadow and with cleaner colors, no outlines either and bigger, simpler shapes for the pickaxes.
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Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:34 pm |
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DTP
Joined: Mon Nov 03, 2008 2:05 pm Posts: 90
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Re: Art Dump
id say ♥♥♥♥ the clean lines all together and go for something sketchy and tatty since they're a "rag tag" army.
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Sun Jul 25, 2010 5:05 pm |
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dragonxp
Joined: Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:16 am Posts: 3032 Location: Somewhere in the universe
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Re: Art Dump
I say we shoudl just make the symbol a R written in blood damnit, cause i give up. I don't have the patience to do logos for very long.
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Sun Jul 25, 2010 5:19 pm |
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Lizardheim
DRL Developer
Joined: Fri May 15, 2009 10:29 am Posts: 4107 Location: Russia
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Re: Art Dump
Picturewars army I might turn into a CC mod.
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Sun Jul 25, 2010 5:55 pm |
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matty406
Joined: Tue Oct 13, 2009 4:23 pm Posts: 915 Location: Blighty
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Re: Art Dump
That dropship would make a pretty cool craft. And I like the large mech. Off topic: And damn, I'm so interested in PictureWars now, It's my kind of thing. Not sure i'd be able to pull off a match though.
Last edited by matty406 on Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:13 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Sun Jul 25, 2010 6:46 pm |
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madmax
Joined: Sun Apr 22, 2007 8:01 pm Posts: 378 Location: Nomadic
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Re: Art Dump
The Ronin logo doesn't really fit the Ronin's style in my opinion, they're supposed to be like free-minds and rag-tag rebels right, but when I think of a pickaxe I think of things like slave labor and prison. Also, the word Ronin comes from feudal Japan so maybe the text should have more of an Asian style to it (I don't know). Also version 2 is very dark.
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Sun Jul 25, 2010 7:56 pm |
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