I just wanna know, how long did that alone take you? =3

Here's a couple recent sketches of a character for an RPG I'm developing. Links because they're big:
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/7192/shi1u.jpg
http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/7861/shi2k.jpg


Why do I look at that and think of John Cleese? I just expect that guy to break into a silly walk.

its the elbows, methinks


Uninspired mummy. The shoulder is stupid.

Its a great mummy, even yellowy eyes are great.
forget the shoulder, fits perfectly on a deform pose but that perfect skin disturbs me,
you don't want to see a sexy-nurse slut taking out those bandaging, don't you?

It does kinda look like it's about to fall over backwards.

Just look at it from an angle.

The coloring is fantastic (it's got a pixel art feel to it) and it doesn't look sketchy at all.

Not very long, I was just testing blender's new GI because it looks so pretty.

Is this good for a 16 year old?

Your age doesn't really mean a thing when it comes to art skills.
It looks a bit too sketchy and the ass is huge.

Yea Lizard is right... The ass is pretty big and has a lot "hair" lines...

Maybe try tracing over it or otherwise cleaning it up?

Thanks guys.
And her ass is supposed to be huge. It's Tali from Mass Effect.

Less huge ass more gap between legs.

Oh.. ok then... just gonna give you a tip:

Try to "redraw" it, making it more clear...