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BreadFish
Joined: Sat Oct 10, 2009 8:36 pm Posts: 5
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[WIP] Adepta Sororitas
So this is my first real mod (well, the first is some half-ass gold sprayer i was too lazy to work on) so i would appreciate constructive criticism. except on the actor head sprites and jetpack sprites. those aren't mine. herein are 4 actors (Left to Right: Battle Sister, Sister Seraphim, Sister Retributor, Sister Superior) And a few weapons, too (Boltgun, Bolt Pistol, Flamer, Plasma Pistol, Chainsword) There is more planned for this mod. A whole lot more. Tell me what you think.
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Fri Oct 16, 2009 5:57 pm |
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Duh102
happy carebear mom
Joined: Tue Mar 04, 2008 1:40 am Posts: 7096 Location: b8bbd5
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Re: [WIP] Adepta Sororitas
Looks like you need some shading on them. The shapes look decent, but I'm no spriter.
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Fri Oct 16, 2009 6:11 pm |
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Metal Meltdown
Banned
Joined: Thu May 14, 2009 9:22 pm Posts: 826 Location: Lookin' forward to mocking people on Jan 1st 2013.
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Re: [WIP] Adepta Sororitas
Well, first off, the sprites are actually nice, and the bolts actually explode, even though they aren't rockets as they should be. But the chainsword is far too big, and the bolter offsets are... well... off.
Also, if you need some sprites for equipment requisitioned from guardsmen... Feel free to use the Valkyrie.
Last edited by Metal Meltdown on Sat Oct 17, 2009 6:17 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Fri Oct 16, 2009 6:14 pm |
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TorrentHKU
Loose Canon
Joined: Sun Mar 29, 2009 11:07 pm Posts: 2992 Location: --------------->
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Re: [WIP] Adepta Sororitas
Ah, the Sisters of Battle. Fun. Never been into WH much myself.
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Fri Oct 16, 2009 6:16 pm |
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CrazyMLC
Joined: Fri Dec 22, 2006 4:20 am Posts: 4772 Location: Good news everyone!
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Re: [WIP] Adepta Sororitas
It looks good, but you really do need to shade things more. I'll have to try it out for real.
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Fri Oct 16, 2009 7:04 pm |
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Adeptus Sororitas
Joined: Mon May 18, 2009 10:53 am Posts: 36
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Re: [WIP] Adepta Sororitas
Looks awsome. Sisters of Battle rule every war ...
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Fri Oct 16, 2009 8:55 pm |
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BreadFish
Joined: Sat Oct 10, 2009 8:36 pm Posts: 5
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Re: [WIP] Adepta Sororitas
Thanks for the tips, folks, i'm fairly new at this so i can use all the help i can get.
And since i forgot to post credit, i suppose i'll do that now -Wingwolf -DSMK2 -Gotcha! I borrowed some of your stuff, so thanks!
If anyone wants to help me with the spriting, feel welcome. as you can see, i'm not very good at it myself.
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Fri Oct 16, 2009 9:52 pm |
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CrazyMLC
Joined: Fri Dec 22, 2006 4:20 am Posts: 4772 Location: Good news everyone!
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Re: [WIP] Adepta Sororitas
I think it looks good, but a lot of people make the huge mistake of using black at all in sprites. I'll make an edit to demonstrate something...
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Fri Oct 16, 2009 9:54 pm |
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wiffles
Joined: Fri May 08, 2009 1:39 am Posts: 482 Location: Playing a children's card game
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Re: [WIP] Adepta Sororitas
ooooh my favorite dawn of war 1 race, I would help If i didnt have my other work, and wasnt a fail keep up the good work!
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Fri Oct 16, 2009 11:37 pm |
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Miles_T3hR4t
Joined: Mon Jun 04, 2007 5:55 am Posts: 1627 Location: Ohio
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Re: [WIP] Adepta Sororitas
Well, I'm not going to talk about sprites, I don't have the room to. I like 40K as much as the rest of us, so I'm gonna try to keep this as simple as I can.
We've had bloodravens, space-wolves, imperial guard, and imperial fists, ALL of which, include bolters of various kinds, chainswords of various kinds, and flamers of a multitude of kinds, and I think 2 or 3 plasma weapons. we have enough bloody imperial WEAPONS! Actors on the other hand, we can always use more actors. Make the weapons more specific, IE 2-handed Eviscerator , not just a 1-handed chainsword, and maybe give them, I dont know a storm-bolter, perhapse make grey knights with it and just make the entire inquisition, so that you could have say, psy-cannons and force-weapons. Thats not to complain though. I like the sisters of battle way better than the spess-mahreens, the only thing is we've had SOO many of the marines that anyone who seriously has a bunch of 40K mods, has like 12 different bolters as is. My suggestion to you, is for weapons, only give them the ones that are either A) specific to sisters of battle, or B) haven't been done 80 billion times in the past. this way it doesn't feel so stale.
I'll download when either A) it is nolonger a WIP, or B) when it has more weapons or better graphics.
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Sat Oct 17, 2009 7:19 pm |
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