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 [WIP] Adepta Sororitas 
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So this is my first real mod (well, the first is some half-ass gold sprayer i was too lazy to work on) so i would appreciate constructive criticism. except on the actor head sprites and jetpack sprites. those aren't mine.

herein are 4 actors (Left to Right: Battle Sister, Sister Seraphim, Sister Retributor, Sister Superior)
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And a few weapons, too (Boltgun, Bolt Pistol, Flamer, Plasma Pistol, Chainsword)

There is more planned for this mod. A whole lot more.

Tell me what you think.


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Looks like you need some shading on them. The shapes look decent, but I'm no spriter.


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Well, first off, the sprites are actually nice, and the bolts actually explode, even though they aren't rockets as they should be. But the chainsword is far too big, and the bolter offsets are... well... off.

Also, if you need some sprites for equipment requisitioned from guardsmen...
Feel free to use the Valkyrie.


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Ah, the Sisters of Battle. Fun. Never been into WH much myself.


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It looks good, but you really do need to shade things more. I'll have to try it out for real.


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Looks awsome. Sisters of Battle rule every war ...


Fri Oct 16, 2009 8:55 pm
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Thanks for the tips, folks, i'm fairly new at this so i can use all the help i can get.

And since i forgot to post credit, i suppose i'll do that now
-Wingwolf
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I borrowed some of your stuff, so thanks!

If anyone wants to help me with the spriting, feel welcome. as you can see, i'm not very good at it myself.


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I think it looks good, but a lot of people make the huge mistake of using black at all in sprites.
I'll make an edit to demonstrate something...


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ooooh my favorite dawn of war 1 race, I would help If i didnt have my other work, and wasnt a fail :P
keep up the good work!


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Well, I'm not going to talk about sprites, I don't have the room to. I like 40K as much as the rest of us, so I'm gonna try to keep this as simple as I can.

We've had bloodravens, space-wolves, imperial guard, and imperial fists, ALL of which, include bolters of various kinds, chainswords of various kinds, and flamers of a multitude of kinds, and I think 2 or 3 plasma weapons. we have enough bloody imperial WEAPONS! Actors on the other hand, we can always use more actors. Make the weapons more specific, IE 2-handed Eviscerator , not just a 1-handed chainsword, and maybe give them, I dont know a storm-bolter, perhapse make grey knights with it and just make the entire inquisition, so that you could have say, psy-cannons and force-weapons. Thats not to complain though. I like the sisters of battle way better than the spess-mahreens, the only thing is we've had SOO many of the marines that anyone who seriously has a bunch of 40K mods, has like 12 different bolters as is. My suggestion to you, is for weapons, only give them the ones that are either A) specific to sisters of battle, or B) haven't been done 80 billion times in the past. this way it doesn't feel so stale.

I'll download when either A) it is nolonger a WIP, or B) when it has more weapons or better graphics.


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