Paint you say

Drew this on my desk during math class today.
Shame my phone's camera is such utter ♥♥♥♥ though. :/

I don't see what's with all this draw on your desk crap, I've always preferred paper.

Obviously so other people can see your beautiful art. Like last year my friend would write "PANTS" on all the desks.

Could you be more precise?

I already know about the second one's shoulders, maybe also too short legs, anything else?

the guy needs longer arms, and arms need to be closer to the chest and are too short (he can't even use trouser pockets), as a tip I would say do a lot of mannequin drawings to increase your "proportional sense". in fact the arm should be probably slightly longer than I've shown below.

I would have used mannequines if I'd use a program which supports layers.
I really like the look which you get from MSpaint, that crispy look, so I can't do mannequines.

That will quite helpfull next time though, thanks.

A somewhat better version of the guy Iposted earlier. Now on paper, and shot with a decent camera.



Yes, its a Coalition light-ish guy. >______________>'

And i'm aware that the feet are too small...

His body is completely disproportionate and it looks like he is made of Jet-Puff Marshmallows. The perspective on the shoulder spaulders looks weird.

He's not meant to look realistic at all, so that 'marshmallow' look is pretty much what I was going for, except I wasn't thinking of marshmallows... I wish I did though... I was startving and bored out of my mind... >_______________>'
And yes, I do agree the shoulder pads look wierd, why didn't I notice that before? \:|

Arms too small and doesn't look 3D even though he's standing where you would see some depth. Shade better? Make the legs a little wider apart and legs bent?

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use the pencil tool in GIMP or PS? not everything is antialiased

I really like it, to be honest.