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Joined: Thu May 08, 2008 8:12 am Posts: 61 Location: sweden 
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  Oblivion TwiceThis topic is now Officially DEAD!
Last edited by molemian on Wed Dec 10, 2008 1:26 pm, edited 7 times in total. |
| Tue Dec 02, 2008 8:21 am |
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Re: Oblivion Twice what is shipwreckers?
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| Wed Dec 03, 2008 2:35 pm |
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Joined: Thu May 08, 2008 8:12 am Posts: 61 Location: sweden
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Re: Oblivion Twice DEAD
Last edited by molemian on Wed Dec 10, 2008 1:26 pm, edited 1 time in total. |
| Wed Dec 03, 2008 2:41 pm |
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Re: Oblivion Twice Uhh. You... do realize that a plane with solid steel blender blades is going to rip itself apart, right?
If it's good for choppin', it's generally heavy. That, and... you know, stuff gets through... At over four hundred miles an hour... Exploding... |
| Wed Dec 03, 2008 10:52 pm |
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Joined: Thu May 08, 2008 8:12 am Posts: 61 Location: sweden
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Re: Oblivion Twice DEAD
Last edited by molemian on Wed Dec 10, 2008 1:27 pm, edited 1 time in total. |
| Thu Dec 04, 2008 12:51 pm |
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Re: Oblivion Twice Nielsen is a Danish name, not Norwegian, and Alexander is very rarely used in Scandinavia. The closest name to Alexander is Sander. A more realistic name you could use would be Gunnar Nilsen.
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| Thu Dec 04, 2008 9:37 pm |
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Joined: Thu May 08, 2008 8:12 am Posts: 61 Location: sweden
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Re: Oblivion Twice DEAD
Last edited by molemian on Wed Dec 10, 2008 1:27 pm, edited 1 time in total. |
| Fri Dec 05, 2008 8:15 am |
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 Joined: Wed Dec 26, 2007 6:33 am Posts: 1743 Location: Trapped in UCP. Send help.
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Re: Oblivion Twice Nationality is the country you're born in.
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Joined: Fri Sep 21, 2007 9:50 pm Posts: 419 Location: KS
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Re: Oblivion Twice Ophanim wrote: Nationality is the country you're born in. Don't forget that patriotism is devotion to your country! |
| Sun Dec 07, 2008 2:00 am |
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Re: Oblivion Twice molemian wrote: Ok, i have had enough of this: Quote: This book is meant to be a god-D*** FANTASY-book, it is not and i mean NOT meant to be realistic so quit PM-ing me about stuff that would not work in real life! Quote: Characters (so far) Note: the characters has nothing to do with reality even though the names are real. |
| Mon Dec 08, 2008 11:44 pm |
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Banned  Joined: Fri Apr 06, 2007 4:31 pm Posts: 367 Location: no u
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Re: Oblivion Twice I thought this was about the GAME Oblivion... which I love! What a misleading disappointment...
Pretty cool storyline though, a bit of a novice author I can tell though, you need to strengthen your vocabulary. |
| Tue Dec 09, 2008 3:25 am |
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Joined: Thu May 08, 2008 8:12 am Posts: 61 Location: sweden
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Re: Oblivion Twice DEAD
Last edited by molemian on Wed Dec 10, 2008 1:27 pm, edited 1 time in total. |
| Tue Dec 09, 2008 12:01 pm |
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Banned Joined: Fri Apr 06, 2007 4:31 pm Posts: 367 Location: no u
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Re: Oblivion Twice molemian wrote: i am currently writing the 4 chapter and will soon post the first one here..... DMWolfe: thanks. Wildstar: english is not my first language but i am still learning. leadpumper12: what was that supposed to mean?  Well in that case your English is pretty good! I didn't even notice. |
| Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:42 pm |
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Joined: Wed Dec 26, 2007 6:33 am Posts: 1743 Location: Trapped in UCP. Send help.
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Re: Oblivion Twice DMWolfe wrote: molemian wrote: Ok, i have had enough of this: Quote: This book is meant to be a god-D*** FANTASY-book, it is not and i mean NOT meant to be realistic so quit PM-ing me about stuff that would not work in real life! Quote: Characters (so far) Note: the characters has nothing to do with reality even though the names are real. Saying that is just stupid. "THIS IS NOT INTENDED TO BE IN ANY WAY SHAPE OR FORM CRITICIZABLE I AM MAKING THIS ♥♥♥♥ UP AS I GO THEREFORE YOU CANNOT SAY ANYTHING MEAN. |
| Tue Dec 09, 2008 5:40 pm |
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Joined: Sun Apr 15, 2007 5:56 am Posts: 1191 Location: outside the shithole called the University in the Forest
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Re: Oblivion Twice 100% agreed with Ophanim.
Fantasy is one thing, but bull♥♥♥♥ is another. If you want to invent some special alloy that can be used in blenderplanes, cool, fine. But don't post unrealistic stuff, say it's immune to criticism, and include no sample of say, plot or dialogue. |
| Wed Dec 10, 2008 2:13 am |
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