Re: New Challenger Approaches
secret_modder wrote:
Grif wrote:
I really doubt he's an absolute moron.
You are about me or him . If i say true the first build i played was build14 on my fav game magazine "Gameplay" "inside" dvd disk with demo of random game , and some "mini-games".That was May 2007 ? I dont remember . The second build i played was build 20 . I didnt buyed cortex yet . If you think about him . He buyed it just "days" ago so he enjoying cortex only right now.
In english you'd say "Are you talking about me or him?". In english you'd say "If you meant me" instead of "If I say true".
Saying "That was May 2007" makes the reader think you're saying it was May 2007. It sounds like you're completely sure it was then. Instead, use "I think it was may 2007?".
Buy changes to bought when talking about things that happen in the past. "so he enjoying cortex only right now" would be "so he's enjoying Cortex Command for the first time.".