oh, the scene has to be bigger, too....

thats what ive been messing up thanks!

Yep, that's it.
By the way, I'm photo editing #006 to add in some skellies and clones and such.
All of this pretty much accurate to the game of course, it's just hard to get action shots of them ingame, so I'm mashing images together.
Then I can work on the scrolly frame...
Unless of course somebody else wants to do that for me...

i cant, im making gifs for the uber awesome mods.

Okay, here's the picture currently, does it need anything?

a rocket delivering blue and green clones

Well the pic could use more clones, and more gibs. More gore!
Otherwise it's great, even thought my original idea was like having some bunkers or such there, too.

Hm.... explosions?

A flaming rocket, a crashing rocket and tons of explosions.
And all in glowing effects.

The big hole/tunnel thing is ugly and pointless unless there's something going on down there. It should have a clone digging it and then on the surface, somebody throwing a nade.

Into the hole, that is.

Double post is double bad.

But, yeah, that hole needs something.

Edit: It has something, nvm.

Needs a whole lot more fighting, and definitely more air action. It's just a small scale battle right now. If you're gonna rip a Halo 3 commercial, do it right. Needs about 30 or 40 person battle. I don't remember if it's possible to have an AI on AI battle, but if it is, just do that and edit activities. If not, just do it yourself and edit activities. Make a rocket that delivers the entire team, and have em both land once, and nothing else. Take pics of ensuing carnage, but have epic rocket crashes in the air, even though I imagine it'd be difficult. Remember, this'll be the first thing they'll see when they get to Datarealms, so we want their balls to spontaneously combust from the massive epic win of the site.

^ lulz. Suprisingly I didn't get the idea from the halo 3 commercials.
If we want their balls to spontaneously combust from the massive epic win of the site, there should be some photoshopping, to make it prettier. And someone make a grenade that looks like an mini sun (like groundklearer), you know, just a frag with insane glows. Few of those there.

Yeah, lets try to avoid photoshopping. It does nothing but lie to people.

Grif's bunklearer is a good example of ball-busting epicness without post work.

Yeah, but it has to be with things that you can get from the test build and ONLY THAT.
The hole is there to demonstrate the digging portion of gameplay.