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Jack The Llama Commando
Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm
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Location: CONTRACTIONS I DONT NEED CONTRACTIONS
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 Re: Drama Story **FIXING STUFF + ADDING STUFF** I don't care really. D:
Last night I did major fixes, fixing mispellings, (yeah, I wuz' bored.) and took out some things, that make the character development push forward too fast.
Works on more stuff.
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| Thu Jul 19, 2007 7:20 pm |
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couchcaboose
Joined: Tue Oct 31, 2006 6:10 pm
Posts: 358
Location: at ze kopta!
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Re: Drama Story **New Chapter Kinda with Fixes?** You Failz. So much for Mature.
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| Mon Jul 23, 2007 11:30 am |
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Sir Anonymous
Joined: Sun Jan 14, 2007 9:57 pm
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Re: Drama Story **New Chapter Kinda with Fixes?** Well... um... It's well written...
As a fellow writer, you've done brilliantly and it is damn good.
But as a reader, it doesn't seem as satisfying as it could be.
I can definitely see a way for both of the above to bee accomplished. I'll PM it to you, whether you use it or not, shall be seen.
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| Mon Jul 23, 2007 5:17 pm |
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Prod
Joined: Wed Dec 27, 2006 9:52 pm
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Location: California
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Re: Drama Story **New Chapter Kinda with Fixes?** Yes, it was fixed well, Jack.
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| Mon Jul 23, 2007 5:43 pm |
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Jack The Llama Commando
Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm
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Location: CONTRACTIONS I DONT NEED CONTRACTIONS
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Re: Drama Story **New Chapter Kinda with Fixes?** Sorry I took all the awesome romantic scenes, I thought it'd slow it down a bit, it seemed a bit corny rushing forward that fast.
*works more thx to Anonymous *
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| Mon Jul 23, 2007 7:39 pm |
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Prod
Joined: Wed Dec 27, 2006 9:52 pm
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Re: Drama Story **New Chapter Kinda with Fixes?** Yeah, it was suddenly 'OMG BUTT-SECKS!!' but now it is slower.
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| Mon Jul 23, 2007 7:56 pm |
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Jack The Llama Commando
Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm
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Location: CONTRACTIONS I DONT NEED CONTRACTIONS
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Re: Drama Story **New Chapter Kinda with Fixes?** Yeah, I'm trying. :/
But I really haven't written much before, so sorry if it's fail. : (
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| Mon Jul 23, 2007 9:25 pm |
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Sir Anonymous
Joined: Sun Jan 14, 2007 9:57 pm
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Re: Drama Story **New Chapter Kinda with Fixes?** What have I told you about fail?
You cannot fail at writing if you're trying. No matter what you do, no matter how bad you think it is; there will always be someone out there that loves it, but only if you try.
Experience means nothing, if you are turely inspired, you will create brilliant works of art. If not the above still applies.
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Jack The Llama Commando
Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm
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Re: Drama Story **New Chapter Kinda with Fixes?** I'd love to put in what you suggested Sir, I'm just trying to figure out if it's necissary to delete and fix a lot of the stuff I already wrote.
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Sir Anonymous
Joined: Sun Jan 14, 2007 9:57 pm
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Re: Drama Story **New Chapter Kinda with Fixes?** Right the where it is now. Perfect.
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Jack The Llama Commando
Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm
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Location: CONTRACTIONS I DONT NEED CONTRACTIONS
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Re: Drama Story **New Chapter Kinda with Fixes?** Alright gang, I'm finishing up chapter 8.. Uh. It's really really long. :/
So stay tuned, it should/will be finished tonight.
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Kelas
Joined: Fri Dec 15, 2006 5:28 am
Posts: 978
Location: Texas
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Re: Drama Story **CHAPTER 8 Almost done/sorta** Whooo! I'm bumping this thread cause Jack asked me to! Whooo!
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couchcaboose
Joined: Tue Oct 31, 2006 6:10 pm
Posts: 358
Location: at ze kopta!
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Re: Drama Story **UBER LONG CHAPTER COMPLETE READ FOR GREAT LULZ Deserves a bump. It's gewd story much yah. :o
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Mushrooshi
Joined: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:59 am
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Re: Drama Story **UBER LONG CHAPTER COMPLETE READ FOR GREAT LULZ Is there furry porn with that?
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Jack The Llama Commando
Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm
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Re: Drama Story **UBER LONG CHAPTER COMPLETE READ FOR GREAT LULZ No. There isn't. I'll just leave that out for now atleast. I'll be gone for a week on vacation, so its your guys' job to force people to read it and keep it bumped for me.  Thanks, catcha' you later. -Jack P.S. To all my guys on IRC, I love you all. You too Kelas.
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