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Author:  DrVonBarron [ Wed Feb 08, 2012 11:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Song smith - Simple Game

right, This should be simple.

Do two, Four, six, eight or any even number lines of a song, Every Other Line should Rhyme.

The 1st, 3rd, 5th, 7th, 9th etc lines will rhyme with each other, as will the 2nd, 4th, 6th, 8th, 10th,

Due to the finite number of words to rhyme, you may pick out a word from the required line to rhyme with

Example

Post #1 wrote:
There once was a man from the States,
who liked to eat fried chips.
Post #2 wrote:
He had one-hundred-and-one plates,
and an infinite number of dips.
Post #3 wrote:
One day he forgot to buy his meal,
and the chip cook called for a chat.
Post #4 wrote:
The Cook, quite angry, said "What's the big deal?"
And the Man replied "I'm too fat."

Author:  unwoundpath [ Thu Feb 09, 2012 1:33 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Song smith - Simple Game

I think I see a flaw-every pot will rhyme with the first poster, unless I don't understand fully.

Author:  Yoman987 [ Thu Feb 09, 2012 5:59 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Song smith - Simple Game

uwp is correct. The 1st, 3rd, 5th, 7th, 9th etc lines will rhyme with each other, as will the 2nd, 4th, 6th, 8th, 10th, etc. This wouldn't work since there are not an infinite number of rhyming words.

I do believe that the good Doctor means that the final word on each line rhyme with the 2nd-line-under's final word, repetitively, and every other post would make up a new set of words to rhyme. As such:
Post #1 wrote:
There once was a man from the States,
who liked to eat fried chips.
Post #2 wrote:
He had one-hundred-and-one plates,
and an infinite number of dips.
Post #3 wrote:
One day he forgot to buy his meal,
and the chip cook called for a chat.
Post #4 wrote:
The Cook, quite angry, said "What's the big deal?"
And the Man replied "I'm too fat."


DrVonBarron, make sure your rules actually work and make your examples more concise. This is the second time I've had to help you out.

Author:  TorrentHKU [ Thu Feb 09, 2012 6:52 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Song smith - Simple Game

And then someone uses Orange.

Author:  DrVonBarron [ Fri Feb 10, 2012 12:50 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Song smith - Simple Game

Yoman987 wrote:
uwp is correct. The 1st, 3rd, 5th, 7th, 9th etc lines will rhyme with each other, as will the 2nd, 4th, 6th, 8th, 10th, etc. This wouldn't work since there are not an infinite number of rhyming words.

DrVonBarron, make sure your rules actually work and make your examples more concise. This is the second time I've had to help you out.


Sorry, but, now everything flawed is explained we can carry on and quickly patch up the wounds.


++++

In the Land of Space
With stars so bright

there was a ace
Who Excelled at flight.

Author:  unwoundpath [ Fri Feb 10, 2012 1:01 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Song smith - Simple Game

Then when he scaped
From the endless fight

He ran from space
From which was fright

Author:  Edrohn [ Mon Feb 13, 2012 2:15 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Song smith - Simple Game

It was a constant race
lasting day and night

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