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 The World of Aliisen - Criticism Required 
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I'm making a Tabletop RPG Rulebook and I need to create a World to use as a basis. I have the entire document here if you want to read it.

Otherwise, here is the excerpt I'm referring to. Lemme know what you think, constructively:


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