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| Author: | Shade [ Sat Nov 24, 2007 3:02 am ] |
| Post subject: | Jack's Legend |
I asked Jack for inspiration, yet he didn't prove to be of much help. So I decided to take whatever he had and shape it into a story. Well, here the speed writing is in all it's furry glory. One day a bunch of queers went out at midnight...Or rather it was night...Or morning-no- It was just a night like any other night. It was a night when a bunch of queers went around with their adopted kids and gathered candy treats from overweight pedophiles. But there were a group of those who rebelled! They were nomads, chosen aspirants; those were sent forth by their own will to wreak havoc upon the regulars of this day known as October the thirty-first. They blended in with the opaque colors of the night, they climbed the vines strung across the bright, appealing abodes. The young group of loners infiltrated the nearby shrubberies and moved to fro, as they slowly crept ever closer to their prey. It was a young girl with her parents, she was in a costume that resembled a jackolantern. She defied the spirit of this dark day. The youth's approached their prey and leaped from the bushes! One was covered in fur and hair, he was wearing a realistically restored mask of a llama head. The other had a painted face with whiskers jutting from it near the mouth. The third was barking and foaming at the mouth like a mad man in a mental institution. Lights flared all about and armed men with loaded guns leaped from their large vehicles. A shout bellowed through the cold night air and flashes appeared all about. Within a few seconds, the three lay as rotting corpses on the pavement with their blood flowing into the street drains. Jack's great legacy will echo across history as it's depth will stain our minds just like this dark and horrible writing. |
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| Author: | Jack The Llama Commando [ Sat Nov 24, 2007 3:10 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Jack's Legend |
The struggle between society and the man. The small taste of George Orewellian style and wording, also the use of adjectives highlights the more perpetual sections of this small piece of genius. This is a quite fine work of literature and writing. It will be quoted for generations to come. |
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| Author: | Nfsjunkie91 [ Sat Nov 24, 2007 3:10 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Jack's Legend |
<Nfsjunkie91> <Nfsjunkie91> [01:57] <Pyro> (Also lol, truth. He's gay anyway though ) <Nfsjunkie91> <Nfsjunkie91> yeah he's gay anyway <Daman> yeah he's gay anyway |
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