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| Author: | molemian [ Tue Dec 02, 2008 8:21 am ] |
| Post subject: | Oblivion Twice |
This topic is now Officially DEAD! |
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| Author: | leadpumper12 [ Wed Dec 03, 2008 2:35 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Oblivion Twice |
what is shipwreckers? |
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| Author: | molemian [ Wed Dec 03, 2008 2:41 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Oblivion Twice |
DEAD |
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| Author: | The Fat Sand Rat [ Wed Dec 03, 2008 10:52 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Oblivion Twice |
Uhh. You... do realize that a plane with solid steel blender blades is going to rip itself apart, right? If it's good for choppin', it's generally heavy. That, and... you know, stuff gets through... At over four hundred miles an hour... Exploding... |
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| Author: | molemian [ Thu Dec 04, 2008 12:51 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Oblivion Twice |
DEAD |
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| Author: | DMWolfe [ Thu Dec 04, 2008 9:37 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Oblivion Twice |
Nielsen is a Danish name, not Norwegian, and Alexander is very rarely used in Scandinavia. The closest name to Alexander is Sander. A more realistic name you could use would be Gunnar Nilsen. |
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| Author: | molemian [ Fri Dec 05, 2008 8:15 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Oblivion Twice |
DEAD |
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| Author: | Ophanim [ Sat Dec 06, 2008 1:03 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Oblivion Twice |
Nationality is the country you're born in. |
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| Author: | leadpumper12 [ Sun Dec 07, 2008 2:00 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Oblivion Twice |
Ophanim wrote: Nationality is the country you're born in. Don't forget that patriotism is devotion to your country! |
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| Author: | DMWolfe [ Mon Dec 08, 2008 11:44 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Oblivion Twice |
molemian wrote: Ok, i have had enough of this: Quote: This book is meant to be a god-D*** FANTASY-book, it is not and i mean NOT meant to be realistic so quit PM-ing me about stuff that would not work in real life! Quote: Characters (so far) Note: the characters has nothing to do with reality even though the names are real. |
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| Author: | Wildstar [ Tue Dec 09, 2008 3:25 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Oblivion Twice |
I thought this was about the GAME Oblivion... which I love! What a misleading disappointment... Pretty cool storyline though, a bit of a novice author I can tell though, you need to strengthen your vocabulary. |
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| Author: | molemian [ Tue Dec 09, 2008 12:01 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Oblivion Twice |
DEAD |
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| Author: | Wildstar [ Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:42 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Oblivion Twice |
molemian wrote: i am currently writing the 4 chapter and will soon post the first one here..... DMWolfe: thanks. Wildstar: english is not my first language but i am still learning. leadpumper12: what was that supposed to mean?  Well in that case your English is pretty good! I didn't even notice. |
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| Author: | Ophanim [ Tue Dec 09, 2008 5:40 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Oblivion Twice |
DMWolfe wrote: molemian wrote: Ok, i have had enough of this: Quote: This book is meant to be a god-D*** FANTASY-book, it is not and i mean NOT meant to be realistic so quit PM-ing me about stuff that would not work in real life! Quote: Characters (so far) Note: the characters has nothing to do with reality even though the names are real. Saying that is just stupid. "THIS IS NOT INTENDED TO BE IN ANY WAY SHAPE OR FORM CRITICIZABLE I AM MAKING THIS ♥♥♥♥ UP AS I GO THEREFORE YOU CANNOT SAY ANYTHING MEAN. |
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| Author: | The Fat Sand Rat [ Wed Dec 10, 2008 2:13 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Oblivion Twice |
100% agreed with Ophanim. Fantasy is one thing, but bull♥♥♥♥ is another. If you want to invent some special alloy that can be used in blenderplanes, cool, fine. But don't post unrealistic stuff, say it's immune to criticism, and include no sample of say, plot or dialogue. |
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