"ONE HEAVY MISSHUN"
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| Author: | dapaperboy [ Fri Feb 22, 2008 9:14 am ] |
| Post subject: | the story of DarKlones struggling in war. help wanted! |
NOTE: I do NOT take ANY credit for making the DarKlones. i do not know who made them. since thor gave the forum lots of dairy when the forum is lactose-intolerant, the forum shat out all of the topics and info and such into never land. Im making a story about a war with DarKlones. its about war. they are loosing but the "Master Chief" saves them and then leads his army to kick some ass on the enemy. its not much of a story or anything at all but just you wait. when my team and i (if i find any people) get spammed with, "EPIV WINZ!" you'll be sorry. my inspiration: i was bored so i started to kill mass armies of green soldiers with my single Light darklone and i thought of, "One light clone, one heavy mission." the piece of ♥♥♥♥ i call a story so far: note it does not have to go like this this is just something we CAN not MUST base it off of. the first "scene" (screen shot) is showing the DarKlones forced to kill their commander and each other by the [insert awsome enemy army name here] maybe some more killing each other, the darklones digging for gold, being killed by the enemies etc. while this happens, a narrator will talk and say stuff like "this is the effects of war, what time, year, date it is etc explain and give some backround information on how this all happened. maybe a soldier will have a flash back i dont know yet. eventually the screen will roll to a dropshop/pod or something being shot out of the sky and crashing and exploding to the ground and having darkclones shooting at enemy and enemy troops and shoot at the gibs and daraklones to make sure they are dead. (this happens 2 more times maybe). we can parody Saving Private Ryan in this part lol. maybe not. the third time, a Light DarkClone will survive crawling out of the pile of gibs and garbage covered with blood from him self and other shooting and killing about 3 enemies or something. this is all i have. will add more. i am always open to suggestions and comments. revision and editing are always important. maybe i will get my film teacher to help me! o_O yeah, or not. i dont even have a film teacher. sigh. i own a microphone head set to record stuff in and i can get my friends to help me. this will be hard to record but i am trying to teach my self Fraps and i can do screenshots but not gifs. i just installed fraps and i have never touched it yet. im going to play some more CC with darkclones and work on story. HELP WANTED! |
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| Author: | Falcon X [ Sat Feb 23, 2008 12:21 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: the story of DarKlones struggling in war. help wanted! |
My face is twitching... That was... I don't even know what to say. |
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| Author: | Cinos [ Sat Feb 23, 2008 12:21 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: the story of DarKlones struggling in war. help wanted! |
"ONE HEAVY MISSHUN" |
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| Author: | Krumbs [ Sat Feb 23, 2008 12:33 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: the story of DarKlones struggling in war. help wanted! |
dapaperboy wrote: i am always open to suggestions and comments. Heres a suggestion, gather up all your hopes and dreams and let them die. Just kidding. But seriously, what the hell was that? |
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| Author: | Metal Chao [ Sat Feb 23, 2008 12:35 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: the story of DarKlones struggling in war. help wanted! |
I think that you should rethink. And if you haven't written a better plan, maybe come up with a totally new idea after that, I recommend asking someone to give you lessons in writing. |
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| Author: | Falcon X [ Sat Feb 23, 2008 1:09 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: the story of DarKlones struggling in war. help wanted! |
Cinos wrote: "ONE HEAVY MISSHUN" Hey Cinos is a pretty cool guy, eh reads storys and doesnt afraid of anything |
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| Author: | venn177 [ Sat Feb 23, 2008 1:24 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: the story of DarKlones struggling in war. help wanted! |
Falcon X wrote: Cinos wrote: "ONE HEAVY MISSHUN" Hey Cinos is a pretty cool guy, eh reads storys and doesnt afraid of anything Hey Falcon X is a pretty cool guy, eh uses old memes in a good way and doesnt afraid of moderating. edit: Honestly though, best use of that meme ever |
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| Author: | The Fat Sand Rat [ Sat Feb 23, 2008 3:57 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: the story of DarKlones struggling in war. help wanted! |
I'd like to ask a mod to give this thread a mercy lock/delete. The OP really shouldn't be subjected to the level of flaming that will come out of this. |
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| Author: | Seleia [ Sat Feb 23, 2008 4:06 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: the story of DarKlones struggling in war. help wanted! |
Lolk |
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