Blurry

I'd appreciate some help with this if anyone has the motivation.

It'd be easier if we know what you're making. :p
Would guess it's a boulder though?

Well that's part of what I was getting at but yes it is a boulder.

Its pillowshaded. Try to put the lightsource at somewhere like the top right or top left. It shows 3d much better. You were following the kiwinuptuo tutorial right? I'd try looking at something that is less stylized for right now so you can draw things not in his style. Read through this: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=11299

I tried to put it at the top left, apparently not well enough though.

iscribble somehow still exists so i doodled this.

That's cool, dude

Whirlwinds.

Nice decorative axes.

nasty concept, could have designed it better.

They look fragile!

Eh, they're magical halberds.

Halberds are longer.

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