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Benpasko
Joined: Sun Aug 09, 2009 9:26 am Posts: 1633
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Re: Art Dump
The Decaying Soldat wrote: Benpasko wrote: It's just that your face looks off, even for a manga character. I think that's what people are trying to say. Which parts do you think so? I'm now modifying it. The face is too far down the head, it seems to me. I just don't like how big her forehead looks, but that may be the angle.
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The Decaying Soldat
Joined: Thu May 15, 2008 11:40 am Posts: 1527 Location: In heaven, everything is fine.
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Re: Art Dump
Did some changes. Focus of the face first.
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Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:52 am |
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Natti
Data Realms Elite
Joined: Fri Jul 03, 2009 11:05 am Posts: 3878
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Tue Jun 01, 2010 1:16 pm |
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Geti
Joined: Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:57 am Posts: 4886 Location: some compy
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Re: Art Dump
The foremost eye needs to be rotated a little, you might want to draw a skull on a layer above and see where the eyes and brows and whatever other features should go. I've got to dash, sorry this isn't more in depth. Hair needs work too, mostly just in the fringe..
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Duh102
happy carebear mom
Joined: Tue Mar 04, 2008 1:40 am Posts: 7096 Location: b8bbd5
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Re: Art Dump
Ya'll know you want one of these ties. Subtitle: DRLFF: srs businessOnly took me like five minutes, but hey, it's classy.
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Tue Jun 01, 2010 9:14 pm |
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Boba_Fett
Joined: Wed Jul 30, 2008 10:27 pm Posts: 272
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Re: Art Dump
Does anyone know how to correctly draw hips and legs? I always try drawing form, but I can never draw legs, especially after the knee area. Because of this, I can only draw males with armor or loose pants. I'd really like to be able to draw females too.
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Tue Jun 01, 2010 9:20 pm |
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Control
Joined: Tue Dec 12, 2006 1:09 am Posts: 698 Location: Plymouth, NC
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Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:12 pm |
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Joe
Joined: Tue Jul 21, 2009 4:36 am Posts: 347 Location: The place where asses go to be bad
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Re: Art Dump
Brought to you by your Senior Advertisement Instructor, Gunnery Sargent Hartman!
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Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:20 pm |
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TorrentHKU
Loose Canon
Joined: Sun Mar 29, 2009 11:07 pm Posts: 2992 Location: --------------->
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Re: Art Dump
Soldat, your art is amazing. Although I prefer the very first version back on page 165 for a reason I can't place.
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lafe
Joined: Sat Mar 28, 2009 2:33 pm Posts: 718
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Re: Art Dump
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I entitled it shaken baby. and yes it is a rattle... this can happen only in my art class...
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Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:27 pm |
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Geti
Joined: Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:57 am Posts: 4886 Location: some compy
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Re: Art Dump
Boba_Fett wrote: I'd really like to be able to draw females too. Hahah, no kidding. http://www.posemaniacs.com/ <- do some studies.
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Wed Jun 02, 2010 4:33 am |
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CrazyMLC
Joined: Fri Dec 22, 2006 4:20 am Posts: 4772 Location: Good news everyone!
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Re: Art Dump
Soldat: I like it. Nose is still a bit weird. It either needs to be more anime-y or to be enlarged. Also, the eyes don't seem to be looking at the same spot. The Light source issue is better but still needs a bit of work. Made a little... whatever it is, tried to limit my colors a bit. (It's either a tank, a space ship, or some odd looking pogo-stick.) Whatever it is, I'd appreciate feedback.
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The Decaying Soldat
Joined: Thu May 15, 2008 11:40 am Posts: 1527 Location: In heaven, everything is fine.
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Re: Art Dump
CrazyMLC wrote: Soldat: I like it. Nose is still a bit weird. It either needs to be more anime-y or to be enlarged. Also, the eyes don't seem to be looking at the same spot. The Light source issue is better but still needs a bit of work. Made a little... whatever it is, tried to limit my colors a bit. [img] (It's either a tank, a space ship, or some odd looking pogo-stick.) Whatever it is, I'd appreciate feedback. A nuclear-powered pogo-stick!!!
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Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:54 am |
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Geti
Joined: Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:57 am Posts: 4886 Location: some compy
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Re: Art Dump
Nono, it's a nuclear powered pogo mecha. make the armour less smooth, put a cockpit in the middle. The animate it and put it into a game where the pilot/protagonist is a slightly unhinged veteran of the old wars with eyes that gently beat up and down with the motion of the pogo, the reticle burned into his cornea, his neural implants failing, his trust for the military shattered by their betrayal, his family killed, slowly turning into a part of his pogo tank, becoming part of the machine. Holy ♥♥♥♥ if my windows wasn't expired I'd so draw that. I'll try to get some linux drivers for my wacom so I can draw on this laptop for the time being tomorrow actually, wow. Do want hardcore pogomecha game
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01271
Joined: Tue Oct 27, 2009 3:14 am Posts: 31 Location: Vancouver island, BC
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Re: Art Dump
it's obviously a space marine.
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