I partly finished, but my eyes hurt and I don't know how to make signs for the roof. Critique please

We gotta streamline the post quantity here. There's too much and I know Crazy is punching himself trying to organize this. Maybe keep official submissions to PM?

Just a thought.

whiffles the bars coulors are kind of bland, and i cant seem to tell the different shades form each other. Make the bar have some atmosphere, give it some bright coulors. Mebbie you could have something on the roof. Right now its kina like a grey box.

Seems logical if we use the thread for showing off, getting general critique and, as you said, keep actual submissions to PMs.

for those of you having problems making things on a side-view, like circles, or a billboard,

Draw it as if it where straight and flat, IE corner to corner, rather than along an iso face.

Stretch/Skew by 30 for the right side, -30 for the left side (on the bottom most skew). I forget how to do things for the roof, I think its like 45 and 30 or something.

also disregard my prior submission, it's crap. I may or may not actually participate.

♥♥♥♥...I have to make isometric lettering. How does one do that without using up too much time? I was never good at thinking in multiple dimensions.

If you want big letters, as in signs, then create the outline of a letter then duplicate it. Place it behind/. In front and connect the lines, shade as nessicary.

Agreed. That or something to separate submissions from regular discussion at the very least, like a new topic only for submissions.

I tried to make a new building and failed epicly, so I went back to my own and tried to touch it up a bit. Changed the ugly silver 'gutters' to wood, like your edit, but I didn't put in any of the cool depth-illusion that you had. I might fix it up more later.



Grade 3 yet, what with the new roof and the gradient-shaded windows? :o

EDIT: Oh wait, I did make the garage look like it's surrounded by walls. WALLS 1 PIXEL THICK >:C Does that count for 'depth'? Door and the right window are still flat.

Which is better, with or without peoples?

IMO, with.

I like 'em in the stands, but for some reason, I dunn likes 'em on the field. However, it'd make no sense having people in bleachers, but without players.

I'd prefer people in the field. So we're supposed to make more structures?

I'm just making it for when I have the space to put it in. And I have the practice fresh in mind.

Hmmm...what comes before beta?
Uh...before gamma.
This is my...er...delta? Yeah, let's stick with that.

This is my delta-release of the factory! And I'm only
putting it out here so that when I inevitably lose it,
I can find it again. Oh, and just imagine there's a
parking lot, either one or a few smokestacks, probably
a loading truck, and a sign. Yeah...and maybe a
window. So, have I got the depth technique down?