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p3lb0x
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Joined: Fri Feb 02, 2007 3:53 pm
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Location: in my little gay bunker
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 Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D trembling penis HAHAHAHAHA
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| Sun Jul 15, 2007 11:49 am |
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3 solid
Joined: Wed Mar 28, 2007 9:02 pm
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Location: Somewhere. Nowhere.
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D Father Venn wrote: Jack The Llama Commando wrote: Thank you Venn, I appreciate that.
But I will (seriously) get it done tonight. Or atleast most of it.
On the other hand, Warhammer is fun. Especially when you don't know half the rules, and are using sandals and pieces of styrofoam as cover. WarHammer is stupid, the only thing good about it was the ps2 game Fire Warrior. BURN THE HERETIC! I still haven't read this yet, mostly for fear my little sister will come into the room while I'm reading it.
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Jack The Llama Commando
Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm
Posts: 620
Location: CONTRACTIONS I DONT NEED CONTRACTIONS
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D I kinda' figured out the whole LOVE LOL thing progressed too fast too, but everyone was demanding a sex scene. Which I failed at.  I should end it.
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3 solid
Joined: Wed Mar 28, 2007 9:02 pm
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D NO! ^ Is the reaction of someone who doesn't have a little sister preventing him from reading this. 
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Jack The Llama Commando
Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm
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Location: CONTRACTIONS I DONT NEED CONTRACTIONS
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D Well it is kinda' a rough draft. Sorta. :/
I dunno. I think I might atleast try to redo it, or just scrap it atleast. Right after I get done painting all my SPace Marines teal. :O
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Sir Anonymous
Joined: Sun Jan 14, 2007 9:57 pm
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Location: Bugger if I know.
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D Jack The Llama Commando wrote: I kinda' figured out the whole LOVE LOL thing progressed too fast too, but everyone was demanding a sex scene. Which I failed at. I should end it. I'm going to tell you a trick about writing. Don't write for your readers. Write what makes sense with the characters. Write what comes next in the story. If you write what comes next, your readers will love it. Even if it wasn't what they asked for. Also, never - never end your story by just quitting. Your character are like people in their own world, you can't just quit, you have to write a proper end.
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Jack The Llama Commando
Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm
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Re: Drama Story **"SEXY SCENE" DONEkekeke** :'D I know. But it'd seem a bit cruel to kill them off. I'll start doing massive revisions and fixing what I want fixing. Including adding a couple chapters where I think they are necissary.
If this was Star Wars, you would be Ben Kenobi. D:
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Prod
Joined: Wed Dec 27, 2006 9:52 pm
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Location: California
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Re: Drama Story **Failure. :(** Nice scene of secks. FURRY! No, not really. You should continue.
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Kazuki
Joined: Tue Nov 21, 2006 8:09 am
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Re: Drama Story **Failure. :(** I'll never look at llamas the same way again
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Thanatos
Joined: Sat Jan 06, 2007 3:58 am
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Location: Germany
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Re: Drama Story **Failure. :(** Lol...
I still say if you had more girls it would be interesting.
"hey, excuse us, could you keep it down?" Two scantily dressed catgirls walked in.
"oh, I'm sorry, did we interupt something, were terribly sorry. "
The girls grined at each other and walked towards them.
see, that is the way it should go.
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Prod
Joined: Wed Dec 27, 2006 9:52 pm
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Re: Drama Story **Failure. :(** Then it'd be just a story about big, furry orgies.
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Pyrorex
Joined: Sun Jun 24, 2007 6:13 am
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Re: Drama Story **Failure. :(** ... Point being?
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Jack The Llama Commando
Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm
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Re: Drama Story **Failure. :(** Big furry orgies is pushing too far into the limit of being furry.
A story with animals that occasionally have sex is only mildy furry.
Although nobody minds catgirls. Why does nobody mind catgirls? THey are furry. Kind of.
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| Mon Jul 16, 2007 4:37 am |
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couchcaboose
Joined: Tue Oct 31, 2006 6:10 pm
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Location: at ze kopta!
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Re: Drama Story **Failure. :(** It was "AWRITE", if you know what I mean... (AWRITE=all right/it's ok/meh)... It was too short...
not bad... But this is a first, so no biggie.
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| Mon Jul 16, 2007 5:38 am |
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Jack The Llama Commando
Joined: Thu Dec 07, 2006 7:21 pm
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Re: Drama Story **Failure. :(** Thanks, I guess. Doesn't mean I can get away with failure though.
I need to go find some inspiration. Somewhere. D:
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