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Dauss
A HUMAN BRAIN, SAFELY INSULATED FROM THE TERRORS OF HYPERSPACE
Joined: Sun Jan 28, 2007 8:54 pm
Posts: 1070
Location: Somewhere beyond the endless sea of hyperspace, fighting for your right to call a planet home.
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 Re: Reds at the Gate: Chapter 2: Reinforement Oh, forgot to give myself a name, haven't I?
I think I'll be creative, and say Dauss.
Oh yes.
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| Wed Aug 15, 2007 1:12 am |
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jaybud4
Joined: Tue Oct 24, 2006 10:07 pm
Posts: 511
Location: ☼The Infinite World☼
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Re: Reds at the Gate: Chapter 2: Reinforement Oh dear... I believe this needs a bit of reinforcement...
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Falcon X
Joined: Thu Aug 09, 2007 6:37 pm
Posts: 889
Location: Not Jewtown.
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Re: Reds at the Gate: Chapter 2: Reinforement I only have a problem with loose grammar here and there, but this is an excellent story, albeit a tad short.
I would like to read more, plez.
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| Wed Aug 15, 2007 2:19 am |
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jaybud4
Joined: Tue Oct 24, 2006 10:07 pm
Posts: 511
Location: ☼The Infinite World☼
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Re: Reds at the Gate: Chapter 2: Reinforement You said chapter 2 would have everyone in it... AlphaCommando wrote: @Orindell: Well bacuse as this was an introduction chapter, me and solid were the only ones in it, the next chapter waill be a considerable deal longer and have EVERYONE in it.
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AlphaCommando
Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm
Posts: 514
Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Re: Reds at the Gate: Chapter 2: Reinforement Working that out, origionally this was to be a meeting chapter but I decided to draw it out, trust me Chapter 3 will have everyone, I promise. Can anyone guess what Nitro's custom explosives have added? 10 free drinks at the TS if you guess right.
Also about the grammar, I have a major problem with fixing my own stories, If people wouldn't mind I would like to "hire" editors to help out with that, I would just send you a pre-copy you read over it and help with any fixes, plus you get a peek of the next chapter before anyone else. So would anyone like to help me?
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| Wed Aug 15, 2007 2:43 am |
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Falcon X
Joined: Thu Aug 09, 2007 6:37 pm
Posts: 889
Location: Not Jewtown.
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Re: Reds at the Gate: Chapter 2: Reinforcement O O O
Nitroglycerin?
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AlphaCommando
Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm
Posts: 514
Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Re: Reds at the Gate: Chapter 2: Reinforcement BUUURT! Wrong, think much more powerful.
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Falcon X
Joined: Thu Aug 09, 2007 6:37 pm
Posts: 889
Location: Not Jewtown.
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Re: Reds at the Gate: Chapter 2: Reinforcement C-4
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| Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:26 am |
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AlphaCommando
Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm
Posts: 514
Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Re: Reds at the Gate: Chapter 2: Reinforcement Its custom C-6 so, no.
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| Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:27 am |
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Falcon X
Joined: Thu Aug 09, 2007 6:37 pm
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Location: Not Jewtown.
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Re: Reds at the Gate: Chapter 2: Reinforcement Nuclear Compound
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| Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:29 am |
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couchcaboose
Joined: Tue Oct 31, 2006 6:10 pm
Posts: 358
Location: at ze kopta!
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Re: Reds at the Gate: Chapter 2: Reinforcement Maybe I can do some art for this later.
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Kazuki
Joined: Tue Nov 21, 2006 8:09 am
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Re: Reds at the Gate: Chapter 2: Reinforcement Awesome.
I dunno why, but I really enjoy war-esque stories.
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| Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:25 pm |
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AlphaCommando
Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm
Posts: 514
Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Re: Reds at the Gate: Chapter 2: Reinforcement Why thanks Kazuki  . @Couch: That would be great! Art makes the whole stour better.
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| Wed Aug 15, 2007 6:02 pm |
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Orindell
Joined: Wed Mar 21, 2007 10:15 pm
Posts: 440
Location: Dublin, Ireland
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Re: Reds at the Gate: Chapter 2: Reinforcement I shall be an editor for my good friend Alpha!!! Fire away!!!
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AlphaCommando
Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:27 pm
Posts: 514
Location: Eating ice cream at Graeter's
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Re: Reds at the Gate: Chapter 2: Reinforcement Next chapter out early tomorrow.
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